Leaders of a country have lots of responsibility on their shoulders. They are responsible for the progress of nation as well as well-being of citizens. I agree with the statement charisma of leaders very much depends on the welfare of people.There are certain reasons to it which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, the leaders make the policies related to economic, social, cultural of the nation. The policies should be made keeping in view the benefit of the citizens. For example, the countries like Norway, Switzerland where people are most satisfied with the government as the policies are made for the prosperity of the citizens. Thus, it can be said that good leaders tries to take decisions keeping in mind the profit of citizens of nation.
Besides this, leaders have to take care of the basic needs of people such as health and medical care, basic education to all, removal of unemployment etc. Apart from making deals with other nations for the progress of country, leaders are supposed to address basic problems of the society. The society and nation will be on the path of success when citizens are getting basic needs and are happy with the government. That will be the true essence of successful leadership.
Lastly, a country can become developed from developing when the citizens are making progress and significantly contributing towards the welfare of the society. Leaders can bring this change in the country by providing people employment opportunities. They can make policies to lessen the corruption from the society. All these factors contribute towards wholesome society. Therefore, efficacy of leaders can be judged by the happiness of people of that nation.
In conclusion, the leaders have power to make positive changes in the country. They are elected by the people to take the nation on the path of progress. So, it is truly said that they are the one who can change the way people are living in nation through their policies and the decisions they take.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00591715976 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67987244593 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467455621302 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.51725519 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0526315789 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178525347254 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623951563294 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559291191352 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116110484928 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942198446392 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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