Environmental protection policies should not be applicable to corporations, which generate significant financial and economical growth, even if such growth may have a negative impact on the environment.
I am not agree with the statement proposed here, which is environmental protection policies should not be applicable to corporations, which generate significant financial and economical growth, even if such growth may have a negative impact on the environment. For healthy life of the human being and other animals and birds around us, the healthy environment should be available. As the healthy environment is our need, therefore we should do some efforts for it, it can not happen by only saying that we can do this, we can do that.
As we know many factories and corporations pollute environment by releasing gases which are toxic or may be processed. but, they surely affect the environment. For this, the government applied some rules to assist for reduction in pollution. Some of the rule are factories or corporations should not gases or waste water should not release directly into the water source which is used for the drinking and other purposes. The waste water from the factories should be released away from the human area. Also, for the good environment of the corporations and the factories, there should 20% of the area of the plant covered with the plants or trees. Any factories should not be directly in contact with the populated area. These are some of the rules which imposed on the corporations or factories to make sure that the outcome of these factories and corporations affect the either the human population or the environment.
Author makes this statement to imply that, the corporations generates significant financial and economic growth, which in end gives profit to the government by paying extra taxes. Which is profitable to the government. Even though, the corporations provides people jobs and for government the taxes, the prime aim should be towards the healthy and growthful environments for the welfare of the human being and the other living creatures.
As a conclusions I would like to say that as the human being it is our prime aim to keep the air breathable to all living creatures. It's better to act early before late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
I am not agree with the statement proposed here, which...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...hich generate significant financial and economical growth, even if such growth may have a ...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...es which are toxic or may be processed. but, they surely affect the environment. Fo...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...s to assist for reduction in pollution. Some of the rule are factories or corporations shou...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'gas'
Suggestion: gas
...re factories or corporations should not gases or waste water should not release direc...
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Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tact with the populated area. These are some of the rules which imposed on the corporations...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o the government by paying extra taxes. Which is profitable to the government. Even t...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a conclusion' or simply 'conclusions'?
Suggestion: a conclusion; conclusions
...g and the other living creatures. As a conclusions I would like to say that as the human b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21164021164 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.137566137566 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100529100529 0.0880659088768 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042328042328 0.0497285424764 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.037037037037 0.0444667217837 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.031746031746 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82207637606 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.026455026455 0.030933414821 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.137566137566 0.0997080785238 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0396825396825 0.0249443105267 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0148568991511 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2076.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 346.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326589595376 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234104046243 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182080924855 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153179190751 0.132149295362 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82207637606 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 219.290929204 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476878612717 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 49.0246936157 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.625 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2930892208 59.4972553346 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.75 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.674092028746 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 45.0354046243 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.63414634146 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420535863992 0.391690518653 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153594667906 0.123202303941 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0770757329297 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589028837617 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179332631514 0.149214159877 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171538517121 0.161403998019 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17677399729 0.0892212321368 198% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437901510385 0.385218514788 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117342590556 0.0692045440612 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276940740493 0.275328986314 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14932129776 0.0653680567796 228% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.