Environmental protection policies should not be applicable to corporations, which generate significant financial and economical growth, even if such growth may have a negative impact on the environment.
environment is the utmost essential component for our survival. The need to protect the environment arise from the increassing amount to damage we are causing to it for meeting our wants and needs. Therfore it becomes necessary to enforce laws which will in turn lessen the amount of harm to the environment due to human activities.
The author says that environmental protection policies should not be applicable to the corporations because they generate significant financial and econonmic growth. I dissent with the author's suggestion. increase in industrialization has been a major component in increasing the pollution levels.The release of various harmful chemicals from factories, discharge of chemicals into rivers, use of plastics to manufacture new products, all these has led to the degradation of the environmnent. so, corporations have a major hand in degrading the environment and should not be set free from environmental protection policies. if exempted from the policies, corporations will have no limit to the damage they cause to the environment and they might take a disadvantage of such freedom to increase their gains.
due to industrialization and establishment of newer corporations the amount of exploitation of non-renewable resources has boomed. although, the use of such resources has led to significant developments in various sectors, but we cannot overlook the fact that that the resources might get depleted if not used warily. it the laws that keeps corporations away from harnessing such resources without thinking. Had it not been the laws of environmental protections imposed on them , corporations would have unthinkably depleted the planet of such resources.
lets say, the oil and gas industry is expanding tremendously. lets consider for a moment that there are no environmental protection rules imposed on these industries. What could happen? The industries may get completely soaked in increasing their profits and might use the resources uncontollably. The rate of consumption of oil reserves would increase to a great extent and in very near future we might be bereft of these resources.
consider another scenario, if the corporations are allowed for the genertion of plastics without a limit. there are no laws the corporations have to consider and they would generate enumnerous amount of plastics as they would have no one to check upon them. This will ultimately lead to more non-biodegradable waste ultimately leading the earth, the ocean being covered by layers of such non-biodegaradable wastes.
although corporations generate significant economic and financial growth of a nation but the growth at the cost of nature is vain. corporations have a huge hand in the harm caused to the nature.The damage we do to the nature will reflect back on us some day or later. Like we are already facing the issues of global warming, pollution to a large scale. it is deteriorating the human lives. so, it is a ncecessity to protect the environment. And such laws have to followed by everyone on the planet, from an individual to a corporation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2655.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 490.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41836734694 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30013569283 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479591836735 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 822.6 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9307475429 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.115384615 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57692307692 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24773361579 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676317763 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101461782678 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118879308533 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771374569941 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.