Essay topics: "Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The crux of the topic is that only who knew true sadness can feel true happiness. I personally partially agree with the statement for the following reasons and I am going to provide some examples to bolster my stance.
First of all, happiness and sadness are both expressions of emotion and it is the cycle of our life. But it would be difficult to marginalize true happiness or sadness, there is no touchstone to measure extreme emotion. Happiness and sadness dependent on the perspective situation, for example, the child got good marks and persons got a promotion on a job sheared the same kind of emotion and it is difficult to measure which one is extreme.
If we try to define sadness and happiness, it is dependent on the situation and surrounding incidents. When the situation is morbid or not in favor of a person the situation might call as sad and on vice-versa when a person is ebullient we might call it happiness. People shear happiness on a trifle thing, a person who got a gift would be happy but it is difficult to know is he truly happy or measure his extreme emotion.
People might argue that a person only felt true sadness can appreciate true happiness. It might be true that a person who faced turgid situations can feel even a modicum of happiness. The opulent person can not appreciate the small thing in his life. But how to define the extreme situation and, a person loses someone or lost his job shear the same sadness and it difficult to define which one is extreme.
At the epilogue of the topic, I would say that sadness and happiness are dependent on situations and surrounding incidents, and both are the cycle of phases in our lives and we must appreciate both of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62295081967 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65053933654 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429508196721 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4516036245 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144881031224 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650367638652 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455998715432 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883030075889 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523792846799 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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