The author of the topics argue that each member of society have to follow the rules without the dubious or rebuttals. I agree with the ordinary person in the society, such as nation should not obey just laws, and obligation to resist unjust laws. Since there are several keys to take account of this issue to support the opposite site, I will first address opinions of the counterpart's critics. After that, reliable sources and reasons to reach my conclusion would be directly followed.
Admittedly, we, the elements of a set called society, consists the complicated architecture of our network including various interest groups who willing to their own benefits, and the laws are the results of fighting of long argument and discussion to find the best location where everybody satisfy in the current state, even though the degree of the satisfactions are limited. Some people might believe this logics to stand in the same position of the author because trying to breaking just laws contain high risks of returning to the baseline of the finished discussion for long-long periods. Furthermore, they perhaps insists the global maxima or minima in the real-world social problem do not exists so the resistance for the unjust laws must exist to defend the bias or lopsided profits to specific interest group.
Nonetheless, the noticeable factor what has to be addressed is the boundary or threshold between the just laws and the unjust laws. The concept of parameters distinguish them indicate the set of promises prior histories have been stacked over the thousands years. Therefore, the extend of the responsibility to lead a revolution for unjust laws or to obey just laws seems ambiguous as well. The level of the analysis for any social incident depend on the reviewer's own explanation and the background to the related information.
Nowadays, the representative of the nation gathered in the congress and discuss the better way to optimize the sum of the individual's happiness. The revision or modification of the current fixed rules contain the probability to be changed because the the revision of the laws have been announce every years. Thus, we need to recognize the even small sentences or words in just laws would be changed in the near future. To feel the critical view point to the just laws is the attitude what each individual should have to see the world clearly.
In parallel, the resistance to the unjust laws cannot be judged at that time whether which sides of the war of attacker or victims stand in the right position. history book only records and distort to the sides of the winner of war every time. Hence, the people who cause the innovation or movement are not always right. Military revolutionary attack to get the more authority happened in the many different society, however, everybody probably say this accident is the desired activity.
In conclusion, we have discussed on the issue of whether the each individuals of society should follow just laws and unjust laws. even though the evidence for the author's side seem enough for his conclusion, however, the argument will be fruitful if he consider the matter of aforementioned sources to strengthen the persuasive power of the author's essay.
- The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries 66
- The Gordon Act, which established a wildlife refuge in the Big Dark Swamp, is currently up for reauthorization. The act prohibits the building of roads or cutting of old growth trees in the swamp, though it permits hunting. Many blamed logging activities 34
- The following appeared in a letter from the faculty committee to the president of Seatown University A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for thei 67
- The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries 66
- The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager One month ago all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one t 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2706.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04850746269 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70500256429 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53171641791 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 846.9 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2432664091 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5238095238 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257012271702 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701351074641 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650907726997 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122777126546 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277439803983 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.