The statement puts forth the argument that, in a society, every individual ought to obey fair laws & disobey unfair laws. While i believe in this argument to a reasonable degree, we must discuss in detail about the caveats as we promulgate this to folks in our ecosystem. We will expatiate, in greater detail, on some instances why the citizens ought to responsibly act according to their inner moral compass. The same shall help the civil society & the citizens further an element of rationality around us.
Firstly, we must obey the right laws & uphold to the best of our abilities to allow the beneficiaries to be protected by the law. Consider the abortion laws & their associated outcomes - the abortion laws accord the right of choice to women on suitably carrying & making decisions that impact their body during pregnancy. These laws enable a better society by allowing women to abort a fetus in case of an unwanted pregnancy or in cases of rape where the mother may not be in a state to conceive & parent a baby. While the opponents may believe that aborting a fetus, by upholding such laws, may be equivalent to killing a human life, we ought to evaluate the circumstance from a broader perspective. For instance, if a baby is born to a mother, who may not be able to provide basic needs of the kid in the kid’s formative years then this may lead to a precarious situation where the mother may have to relinquish her baby to the foster care system. This may lead to a circumstance where the mother is distraught because she has to give up her child, the child feels the lack of a mother figure & the family is equally upset. Such instances can disrupt the very social fabric of our society. If each stakeholder upholds & enables the access to reproductive healthcare to women & families, then we will herald a new era of emancipation of right to life for women. Hence we must uphold the right laws, irrespective of their impact on us, as individuals, because there may be a mother or a family that may need the invocation of such laws.
With recent changes in the abortion laws that restrict access to reproductive healthcare & abortion mechanisms at large, we ought to disobey peacefully - civil disobedience in a qualified manner such that our actions of disobedience does not cause civil unrest, violence. How else would such luminaries as Martin Luther King & Mahatma Gandhi have got their rights, if the stakeholders had not disobeyed. If we do not disobey today the new abortion rules, then we may have women giving birth to babies & relinquishing them to foster care, then state will have to parent them - this will increase the burden on the state finances. The children may suffer, due to the lack of a family, in their formative years. The state will never be able to replace a mother & a father. The changed laws may also impact the right to life of women since they will be forced to have babies even when the doctor may perceive a threat to life of the mother due to the delivery of the fetus. Hence we ought to obey the right rules & disobey the unfair ones in an appropriate manner, taking a cue from Rosa Parks & Mahatma Gandhi.
Secondly, as we enforce the said argument in our society, it will cultivate an inner moral compass to enable citizens to communicate, converse & question the policies in a rational manner. The citizens will understand how to discern between the fair & unfair laws, thereby developing a rationality to their decision making process. This will also enable our society to evolve a collaborative mechanism on issues where citizens have different opinions. For instance, Gun Laws are a polarising issue for many since a section of the society believes that we must be allowed the right to posses a firearm for self-defence while the other section believes that we must outlaw such a rule as we have seen many instance of mass gun shootings. Once we have a collaborative mechanism to engage different voices in the community, this will enable a bi-partisan solution for difficult circumstances.
Thirdly, we base this assumption of disobedience, to unjust laws, ought to be done in a civilised manner. The citizens must not engage in violent acts, or hampering essential services. For instance, if some sections of the society do not agree with current gun laws, they must protest peacefully. One must not be swayed by the unfairness & impair the law & order situation of the society. The same will not only create rift in the ecosystem but also dismantle the platform we seek to create for collaboration amongst different sects.
Hence, i believe that we must not only disobey unfair laws but also do so in a peaceful manner while upholding the fair laws. Such a demeanour will enable a more inclusive, safer society that can incorporate diverse viewpoints.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 45.0 12.4196629213 362% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3984.0 2235.4752809 178% => OK
No of words: 822.0 442.535393258 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84671532847 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.35448805897 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74058766258 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 361.0 215.323595506 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439172749392 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1285.2 704.065955056 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7789915509 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53125 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14917133695 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451508916232 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644625355955 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965258609764 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383335299034 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 190.0 100.480337079 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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