First manned space flight is costly and dangerous there is not given any point of due to which specific is given.It is directly given which is not appropriate.
The author view that manned flight is costly and dangerous and ag giving that due to success of series of unmanned space probes and satellite had demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without costs and risks. Author had not considered some point of view and only highlighted some unimportant views and due to that their is many flaws in the author arguement .
First manned space flight is costly and dangerous there is not given any point of due to which specific is given.It is directly given which is not appropriate.Due to this many of the Different which is important point of view is not considered.Due to this many of the different prspectives is misunderstood and due to this is flaw in author point of view.
Secondly Author has taken assumption that due success of series in unmanned space flighrt it is not surely taken it will alwys makes success in future so it is complusory that their will be succes in satellite demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without costs and risks associated with sending men and woman into space.
Third due to some success in series of unmmaned space flight it doesnot means that it will surely in sucess in future so it will not neceesarily to make investment our resurces in manned space flight . Their might be funds get will get decline and their loss occurs and due to this author miss out some important perspectives.And there are many flaws in author arguement .
Thus we conclude that author has miss out madifferent prospectives and due to this all are given in this arguement.
- First manned space flight is costly and dangerous there is not given any point of due to which specific is given.It is directly given which is not appropriate. 50
- The Primarily Goal OfTechnological Advancement Should be to to increase people efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time " 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...portant point of view is not considered.Due to this many of the different prspectiv...
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...ment our resurces in manned space flight . Their might be funds get will get decli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83272727273 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73174145297 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414545454545 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2940356689 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.857142857 118.986275619 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347342219104 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157859127047 0.0831039109588 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185047308411 0.0758088955206 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19784479423 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201582561932 0.0667264976115 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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