The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The following prediction is flawed for copious unwarrented assumptions. Primarily it is based on the balmer island and the sureville island are alike in account of regarding accidints during summer time, but there is not even a single inkling about similarites between these two, results in questionable validity concerning success in the balmer island.
The argument lacks in providing the most important factor causing accident is the climate condition that may be favoueable for Sureille island contrast to balmer island. In later one there may be a heavy rain in summer that's why the the roadways are in dilapidated in the balmer island, despite limiting the rental rate for mopeds during summer that even couldn't bring the same success like in Survulle island. The prediction would be justified considering the atmospheric conditions along with convenient roadways structure during summer.
The stated argument leaves the consideration what type of people are living in the balmer island during summer. people live in sureville islan or come in during summer are more trained to to face the untorward situation with riding mopeds and pedestrain when accidents occurs most, might be totally oppsite to balmer island. The people in balmer island might be more vulnearable to happen accident because of their myopic in the account of tackling the the above stated situation unlike the people in sureville island. The moped facilities are limited during summer but these limited mopeds might not be in friendly contition to ride in balmer opposite to sureville island. The concluded success would be authentic in balmer island similler to sureville considering the these very factors.
The precendent success would be happened in balmer island as same rate with sureville by limiting the mopeds rentals, should be based on all the aspects causing accidents are very much familiar between these two.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...n account of regarding accidints during summer time, but there is not even a single inkling...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...one there may be a heavy rain in summer thats why the the roadways are in dilapidated...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...may be a heavy rain in summer thats why the the roadways are in dilapidated in the balm...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...may be a heavy rain in summer thats why the the roadways are in dilapidated in the balm...
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Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...rate for mopeds during summer that even couldnt bring the same success like in Survulle...
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Line 13, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ing in the balmer island during summer. people live in sureville islan or come in duri...
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Line 13, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... come in during summer are more trained to to face the untorward situation with ridin...
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Line 13, column 450, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...their myopic in the account of tackling the the above stated situation unlike the peopl...
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Line 13, column 450, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...their myopic in the account of tackling the the above stated situation unlike the peopl...
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Line 13, column 675, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in balmer opposite to sureville island. The concluded success would be authentic in...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...idering the these very factors. The precendent success would be happened in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39202657807 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6055705544 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9869131733 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.545454545 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296425160745 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144177956203 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570955144304 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201032658153 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525600439763 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.