Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s v.1
A child learns whatever is taught by his parents and teachers.The knowledge being imparted to a child conforms the facts and figures that have already been established.
Education is the process of facilitating learning, or the acquisition of knowledge, skills, values and morals and personal development.
Educational methods include teaching, training, storytelling, discussion, and directed research.Formal education is structred way of learning.
It is seldom seen that children are given the time or space to explore their inner selves and free their minds.
This is because of the pressure of doing well in school in order to earn high grades
.They are moulded in such a way that they have no other option rather than sticking to books.
When the same children grow up and enter the secondary education they are again restricted to follow a structured pattern in order to get a good job and have a better future.
The formal education imparted to them plays on their mind all the time and they are unable to think outside the realms of formal education.
Therefore, formal education that has been acquired over a period of time succeeds in restraining our minds and spirits instead of seting them free.
The importance of learning in a formal classroom environment has assumed to be of great significance in the modern world because the grades that you get
in your school plays a vital role in getting admitted to a good college for secondary education
and likewise secondary grades will shape your future. Children do not have the freedom to learn aspects that interest them as they are under
constant pressure from their parents. Moreover , the children themselves are conscious of scoring better than their peers in school and so they try to keep their step with their friends who are doing better.
The fear of failing to score grades or passing grades makes them concentrate more on their studies.Even if the students manage
to score better grades, the story doesn't end there.After completing school studies,
there is a stiff competition in securing admission to a reputed university and only few students are able to join a program of study of their choice.
This is because there are various standardized test which judges your competence in the field in which you opt to study.
If you want to have a successful career, then it is essential to earn degrees that endorse your skills in that particular field.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 16
- Some people believe that success in creative fields such as painting fiction writing and film making primarily requires hard work and perseverance Others believe that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned 66
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 58
- The most ideal path for a society to set up its youngsters for positions of authority in government industry or different fields is by imparting in them a feeling of collaboration not rivalry Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you a 75
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and s 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05940594059 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72170455031 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549504950495 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6589971451 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18145168244 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642788182501 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622547575551 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548345374303 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582969789452 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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