There is no denying that, formal education is an indispensable part of human society. It is a basic human right. Some believe that education from educational institutes limits our creativity. This essay partially agrees with the statement and it will try to illustrate in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, our education system generally empahsises students to follow rules and regulations which are designed by governing bodies Formal education generally comprises of theoretical information which is essential to receive a job and it does not teach experiences.The major reason behind why it restricts our mind is that, people usually pay a large amount of money in order to receive a quality education and after pursuing the education pupils
On the other hand, it would be wrong to state that formal education put constraints on our creativity. There are a several examples in societies where people after getting education have successfully established corporate moguls. Formal education provides a platform to the people where they could polish their mind and enhance their creativity. For instance, public could learn the efficient literature skills through formal education and they could utilise this skill in writing novels and poems.
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 33
- Due to effects of globalisation, the cultures of some countries are influenced by others. Some people think this is a natural process. Others think this is a threat to cultural identity. What is your opinion about this? 73
- Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 56
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 56
- Due to effects of globalisation the cultures of some countries are influenced by others Some people think this is a natural process Others think this is a threat to cultural identity What is your opinion about this 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 442.535393258 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47422680412 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90007897687 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 157.017315924 60.3974514979 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.75 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173516790151 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638543461023 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430436755437 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11720189329 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217766200426 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.8420337079 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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