Nation is always represented by the best among its people. From ancient times we can remember only its better counterparts than how it treated its people. From the Roman Senators to the Pharaohs of Egypt, we measure them by the most briliant and daring among them, these are the people who will save the nation in times of danger. Thus a nation's greatness is best measured by its achievements than by the welfare of its people.
As the saying goes " Strength of a chain is measured by its weakest link " , the population tend to believe that nations well being should be measured on how much it spends on the poor and needy, this is indeed true. A nation how much ever it can earn should always look after its downtrodden. When we look at USA, we can observe a lot of the governments budget is spent on welfare such as Medicare, Medicaid etc, likewise we can observe the same situation in Denmark or Norway where, even more of the country's budget is spent in welfare. But the crucial issue we are not considering here is the overall dedication and happiness people posses. Even though having less poor in a country is very important, it is not necessary that a nation has to spend a lot on it; this is exemplified in USA being the best in all technological breakthroughs and medical care where as Sweden is known for Clash of Clans and Pewdiepie.
From time immemorial we have always looked up at the best among the people. The great rulers of the roman empire, philosopher of Greece and, great artists and inventor of the renaissance. Even in the 20th century we remember the great scientists such as Einstein, Marie Cure, Oppenhiemer who have ushered in a new age of scientific enquiry and technology, but we easily forget about the hardships faced at that time. The economic crash, two world wars etc, which has considerably less impact to us know compared the previous ones.
This does not mean to say that, we shouldn't look after the weak. The very nature of discoveries, arts or the greatness of rulers helps the populous in giving hope and certainty, this helps them overcome the difficulties they are facing. The threats can be further ameliorated by various social programs and charities. Thus helping everyone in the society.
Thus a nations success should be measured by the success of its rulers, artists and scientists, this is strongly linked with the general welfare of the nation. A healthy and wealthy nation can only bring out the best among its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, so, thus, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73103448276 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5675824406 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514942528736 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0150732261 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.315789474 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196524544802 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647593190119 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676200147044 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112834400851 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745454596139 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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