Every nation has its own rule and development. Also, it contains some best carectrastic along with some worst features.the rulers, artists, and scientists are not only thing that shows the welfare of the nation but also some main points such that culture , education, and view of the people. moreover, these are the features helps to identify the richness of the particular nation.
One of the main that affect more is education,the more number of people are educated the more technologies are develope in that nation. the literature rate shows the strength of the nation and it indirectly affects the welfare of the nation.acordind to national authority, in the last 5 year data of literacy Indians show a significant increase and because of that more and more business are startups. because of the that more employmet created so the unemployment rate slide decrease.
Furthermore, the average poverty ratio in that nation clearly indicates how strong the nation is. the difference poor and rich create more problem and it directly affects to the welfare of the nation.Also the culture of the nation is the most important thing that show how the nation's people live.every nation have theair own culture.it show the habit of the people and how they live. the living style also moves directly to the nation's prosperity.
However, the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists also show the good thing of the nation.it's show the divers skill of the nation.the technology development and invention also put a good impect on others.but it was not help to justify for all nation.
In recapitulate,the new inovation and the artistic beauty is not only the points that prove the any contry's prosperity of living but also the social life of the people , diversity of the culture and education this are the point that are the show the national are enough richer and better place to live.
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- The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04458598726 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77051856397 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496815286624 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0767599456 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211096333664 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952257362807 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484984722414 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129111871214 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448336029823 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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