Where is the government from? it is from the people. As is known to us all, Government is elected by the people and what the main goal of the government is to serve for its people. While the argument seems transgress this common rule, it indeed has the reasonable aspects. Therefore, I partly agree with the argument and the subsequent is my opinions.
To begin with, government officials make choices or decisions based on their own judgment would be more efficient, professional and unbiased. Since the government officials are elected from the people, most of them are eminent from their respective fields. They have more professional knowledge and more pragmatic views. It would be more prudent and appropriate to rely on their own judgment.
Besides, the will of the people they serve always is hard to make a consensus and sometimes is volatile and easily to be changed. If government officials rely on the will of the people, then it would be dilatory to draw a conclusion. For example, if the government wants to construct a supermarket near a street where there are some residents live. Some would support this decision because it will be more convenient for shopping, but some might be opposed because it would make noise.
However, if the government officials take a blind eye on the will of the people, it also causes many negative results. For instance, the officials would be corruptive and decadent in terms of they can make decisions by themselves; meanwhile the people would be disappointed and even want to override the government.
In conclusion, the government officials should not only rely on their own judgment and make use of their professional judgment, but listen to the will of the people according to its elective nature.
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- Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Where is the government from? it is from the people. As is known to us a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79753168608 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489795918367 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0466895322 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205655604208 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764706054852 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060521191779 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135039825244 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578666738624 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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