The government should play a minimum role in private business matters
Is there any role for the government for the small businesses to thrive? The answer is a big Yes. What is the role of the government or upto what extent is their level is a question. The government should play an active maximum role in private business matters. When the government tries to involve, they should try to proactively help the small businesses.
Firstly, think about the large private business companies. When we think about the Amazon, Facebook or similar business companies, their incomes are skyrocketting in millions. In India, the richest man is Mr. Mukesh Ambani, who is the Chairman of Reliance Industries. The government tries to help multi-millionaires like him by providing more incentives and avoid the poor small businesses. On the contrary, the government pay very less attention to the small scale businesses who are struggling because of their loans and debts.
It is generally known that the globalization and privatization have made the affluent more affluent and the poor, poorer. In this covid season, it is the small scale business men who have greatly struggled to meet their both ends. Thus the government must actively work for the welfare of the small scale business. Proper measures must be taken for the upliftment of the small scale business people. Reducing the loan interest or similar measures are proper steps from the government's side to take.
If the government is only taking a minimal role in small scale business, of course those businessmen will be shattered and may end their lives due to poverty and other financial struggles. Taking an aerial survey by the government about the small scale business and assisting those who are in dire need is very appropriate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, of course, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09540636042 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81113562233 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526501766784 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4017965255 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.8235294118 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289713365558 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103563392314 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113185033824 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191714920699 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120815555227 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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