Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above In developing and supporting your position you should consider ways

Laws shall be respected by everyone and each entity such as governments that is a well-known fact. If a government are justified in breaking laws, one could think that its powers are endless and could harm the whole society. A greedy politician might not pay taxes because the government are justified in breaking laws.
However, governments have various duties toward their people and fulfill their duties could lead to complex situations where civil laws must be circumvented by governments. I believe, if it is a matter of national security, governments could circumvent some civil laws.

First of all, civil laws concern everyone including governments and the first duty of governments is to protect their citizens. Besides, one should bear in mind that is members of governments who have the power to pass a bill. That being said, no civil law should be seen as an obstacle for the protection of national security. Thus, if members of a government are competent, governments won’t need to circumvent any law for protecting their people. Nevertheless, there will always be exceptions and incompetent members of government.

If any, governments must always fulfill their first duty which means to protect the society from any kind of danger. For instance, imagine a suspected terrorist is going to attack, we can easily think that governments should collect information about the terrorist even if that means to break some civil laws and hacking his or her computer. No one would demand to the government a justification. For instance, the state of Israel and their citizens are known to often be a victim of terrorist attack, their police forces consistently collect data from suspected terrorists in order to prevent them from attacking Israelis. One should bear in mind that situation concerns national security, for other situations that do not concern national security governments must respect their own laws.

To conclude, I am of the point of view that governments should protect their people no matter what, their first duty is to protect civilians. If protecting civilians means to break some laws, they must do it but that also means they fail to pass effective laws because they could have anticipating that some laws will be an obstacle for their greatest duty.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 157, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'civilians'' or 'civilian's'?
Suggestion: civilians'; civilian's
... is to protect civilians. If protecting civilians means to break some laws, they must do ...
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Line 8, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be an obstacle for their greatest duty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16129032258 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80111138606 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470430107527 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.638555168 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.941176471 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183091303148 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745630894894 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420709523784 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118402461442 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325770926547 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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