A successful and efficient government is the one which strives for the betterment of the mankind by solve the problems in front of the nation, both active and passive. In fact, a good government looks far beoynd the limits and problems in a short term period and strives to contribute for the betterment of upcoming generations.
Looking back at the evolution of mankind, each and every other discovery has been made to solve some kind of problem in front of humanity. We have came a long way with the new discoveries and marvelous scientific studies. For instance, Albert Einstein, when proven his theory about the universe, it solved many of the conundrums of scientists not only about the universe, but also correlated his theory with the day to day life. Today, any government should have a balanced stand between solving the problems of current as well as problems such as depletion of Ozone layer, solution for which must be found in a long term in order to literally save us from extinction. Furthermore, question of fossil fuels which are being utilized today at a very large scale with number of vehicles increasing on the road day by day,many nations, developed as well as those in an embryonic stage have started shifting to renewable energy sources. Also, the scope of renewable studies and engineers is rising worldwide, a lot much research is going on considering the long run for energy.
In conclusion, a nation's government should be balanced in solving both current as well as future problems in order to serve and for the betterment of the next generations.
- The following appeared in a health magazine."The citizens of Forsythe have adopted more healthful lifestyles. Their responses to a recent survey show that in their eating habits they conform more closely to government nutritional recommendations than they 81
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 50
- Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.Writ 50
- Hospital statistics regarding people who go to the emergency room after roller-skating accidents indicate the need for more protective equipment. Within that group of people, 75 percent of those who had accidents in streets or parking lots had not been we 63
- In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en made to solve some kind of problem in front of humanity. We have came a long w...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... problem in front of humanity. We have came a long way with the new discoveries and...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...hicles increasing on the road day by day,many nations, developed as well as those in ...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ong run for energy. In conclusion, a nations government should be balanced in solvin...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...uld be balanced in solving both current as well as future problems in order to serve and f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 268.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90298507463 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74520380069 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7386595196 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 5.21951772744 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210980897308 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894626586671 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641936431977 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151561996461 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100626509802 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.