Investment is very crucial part of the government. They should be precies. If they invest on one thing then their budget get imbalance. so they have to plan carefully about each and everything. According to the argument that government should invest as much in arts as they do in military. I am not in favour of that because their are so much flaws in it and in my perspective we should invest as much as we can do on military.
First, Military is important for us because of them we are safe and enjoy our live's. Military requirement should be fulfill first and then the government invest on other thing.
Second,Arts is important for us because it gives us the ability of imagination and creativity. It has a vast role in our life but if we give more importance to arts than military than it will affect our future. Arts will never save us from any attack or disaster. We can imagine things vastly through arts but its very difficult to implement them, because we don't know the figure and facts about the circumstances.
Government should decide their priorities and estimate how much they can invest on which area because both has own pros and cons we can't neglect any of them.
Those who fond of arts, they are incapable of make an art if they are not free from minds. Military gives us safety and freedom to do what we want. That's why we able to do our work without any insecurity.
If we do not invest on military then their requirement not fulfill on time, as they live in areas where communication and transportation not available easily. Which degrades the possibility to serve them.
So according to the issue government should invest as much in arts as they do in the military, will not be beneficial. Arts not return us productive as military does. Military fight us, secure us from the attacks. Military scarifies their life for our safety. But arts only gives us luxury, elegance and standard. It enhance our lifestyle but it never secure us from the attacks.
In conclusion, government invest on military first then on arts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r lives. Military requirement should be fulfill first and then the government invest on...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191435768262 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.153652392947 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0780856423174 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0579345088161 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.133501259446 0.0444667217837 300% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.138539042821 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0100755667506 0.0406280797675 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.63404562052 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201511335013 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0503778337531 0.0997080785238 51% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0302267002519 0.0249443105267 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176322418136 0.0148568991511 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2062.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 362.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69613259669 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292817679558 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209944751381 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157458563536 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113259668508 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63404562052 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469613259669 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 48.8105877343 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.48 23.380412469 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1604192849 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.48 141.124799967 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.48 23.380412469 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.28 0.674092028746 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.94800884956 162% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.21349557522 288% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 35.4744751381 51.4728631049 69% => OK
Elegance: 0.985401459854 1.64882698954 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466661264132 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103013157622 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111011048763 0.077325440228 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522154064675 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209599311964 0.149214159877 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156199924563 0.161403998019 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179938600564 0.0892212321368 202% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.187939156734 0.385218514788 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0440935399531 0.0692045440612 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242548274008 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164155213848 0.0653680567796 251% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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