Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing

There are lot of scientific research are running often in surrounded world.Here issue is about that fund which may be given or not for that particular scientific research whose results may be failure sometimes or unclear.But,that doesn't mean that particular scientific research which are failure at some moment because of any reason.Although,It scientific research can made amazing result after its success.

So,Firstly I am totally disagree with this issue.If scientific research are consequence are unclear and unexpected as wish that doesn't mean that government should not support for fund on that scientific research.In the world there are so many things surrounded which is failure at particular moment.This moment if someone who does ready for help then failure may be converted into success.same in this scientific research if government should not fund for unclear consequences then members of research didn't get encouragement from anywhere.If government should fund for this research then members are encourage and motivate to take big risk on research and development.Example,Suppose we have to invent any scientific research then we must have to investment on it.without any investment we cannot do any thing related that scientific research.

If government should fund for research then it may help for augury success.Principle that without any failure people do not success at all and from the mistakes they must learn lesson from it.so,if government should fund for that it must help for future investment for that research and that scientific research must have to succeed although its first consequences are unclear.

Finally,I conclude that without any support from government's fund to any scientific research,it can't more success in that particular research.so,government should motivate to any scientific research whether its consequences are succeed or may be failure at sometime.

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Average: 2.3 (3 votes)
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243506493506 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.152597402597 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113636363636 0.0880659088768 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0519480519481 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0422077922078 0.0444667217837 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.159090909091 0.12292977631 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0162337662338 0.0406280797675 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.44598422366 2.79330140395 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194805194805 0.030933414821 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0681818181818 0.0997080785238 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0551948051948 0.0249443105267 221% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0194805194805 0.0148568991511 131% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1906.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 287.0 452.878318584 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.64111498258 6.0361032391 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.418118466899 0.366273622748 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.355400696864 0.280924506359 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.264808362369 0.200843997647 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.18118466899 0.132149295362 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44598422366 2.79330140395 123% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 219.290929204 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452961672474 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.212247509 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6194690265 19% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 71.75 23.380412469 307% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 220.261776076 59.4972553346 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 476.5 141.124799967 338% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.75 23.380412469 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.674092028746 297% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.21349557522 499% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 107.290069686 51.4728631049 208% => OK
Elegance: 1.69736842105 1.64882698954 103% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2854978515 0.391690518653 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.439021430501 0.123202303941 356% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0669888790847 0.077325440228 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.92296268638e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210116572301 0.161403998019 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335299242676 0.0892212321368 38% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.469036112382 0.385218514788 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0701188300572 0.0692045440612 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210116572301 0.275328986314 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335299242676 0.0653680567796 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 13.5995575221 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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