In today's world, most of the Governments are secular in nature, i.e., the government is of the people, by the people and for the people. The youth of the country form the cardinal part in its development. In order to brighten the future of the country, its young minds must, even if they are creative by birth, needs to be well-trained. A lot of Universities do focus on the same. However, the increase in technology has left no value for money, from Richer perspective. However, the poorer are becoming more poor and thus cannot afford high quality education due to high tuition fee.
A huge number of brilliant brains are found in the rural areas. But, these minds cannot afford for the high quality education and thus would end up dis-continuing their education. One of my day to day example is, the kids of my house maid. She is too good with calculations/table, however due to the huge fees in private universities, they discontinued their education and joins her Mother for the daily wages. However, if the government offers free university education for them, then they could be trained well and might become one of the brilliant brains of the future.
Once these kids are well trained, the government can ensure that they join the government institutions to train the next batch of students, with similar background. Thus, ensuring that the people would not get carried away with greed and would indeed return the favour from the government. This will inturn create more employment opportunities, like in teaching profession, helps in implementing the technology in agriculture and so on. Thus, ensuring to bridge the gap between the poor and the rich using education.
Thus, it is very much important for every citizen to be well-educated to ensure the bright future of the country and the building block to ensure the same is through educating the rural minds.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93059936909 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80398168468 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6642015844 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141962002094 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433514769681 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054831184125 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081810237983 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455586264455 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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