In virtue of its huge contribution in establishing abundance of modern society, many people think that any regulation should not be imposed on scientific research. However, without restriction on science research, many problems in various fields are expected.
Of course, the science is efficacious in various ways. The science is the strongest intellectual buttresses for flourish of modern era. It has facilitated advances for the society and individuals. For example, by inventing and developing many transportation technologies, science enhanced the range of activities. It fostered the growth of economy. Furthermore, owing to the development of information technologies, people now enjoy the wider relationship all around world.
However, even though the scientific researches enable such developments in various field which are beneficial for both the society and individuals, unless they are well managed, it may generate deleterious side effects. First, the result of scientific research can cause serious environmental problem. For example, in Russia and Japan, the explosion accident of radiation plant occurred, and the radiation polluted the environment irreversibly. Due to its difficulty to recover once damaged environment, precaution measures for scientific research is needed.
Second, the scientific research can generate several ethical problems. For instance, in pursuing blindly purpose of the research, some scientists may sacrifice many innocent lives of creatures far more than they needed. Furthermore, unless the researches are monitored and scrutinized well, even the inalienable human right can be violated. If we recall the historical cases of Germany and Japan during World War Two, it becomes obvious that the concern is excessive. They committed a lot of cruel crimes for scientific research. By restriction, we need to prevent these tragedy.
All in all, even though the science plays the salient role in progress of development of human being, the scientific research without being monitored and managed carefully can militate negative repercussions, the regulations on the science are necessary.
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...the wider relationship all around world. However, even though the scientific rese...
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...sures for scientific research is needed. Second, the scientific research can gene...
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...egulations on the science are necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96774193548 5.05705443957 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33732400729 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.598284022 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.142857143 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164204166212 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529606077414 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582912267383 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981070570071 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605933949824 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.1639044944 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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