The author has presented quite compelling claims and provided a justifyable reason that support's the author's claim. However, I could not fully agree with the author, as his/her claim is extreme and could be flawed easily. A nation's greatness depends upon various factors such a public health facilities, economy, jobs, recreational activities, technological advancements, etc. In order, to evaluate that the nation is great or not one should have considered many factors apart from politics, arts and science . It would have been good, If the author should have considered these factors before making such an extreme claim.
Humans basic needs come first, there is a saying in Hindi language 'Roti, Kapda, Makan' which means Food, Cloths and House to live. These are quite basic needs of human for a decent life. If government is successful enough to fulfill these basic need of a human, then it might play an important role in nation's happiness. Here there is no need of some extraordinary efforts from any field like nation's ruler , artists or scientists. If these basic need would not be fulfilled by the ruler or the govenment than even the country might have contributed in research like discovery of human life on another plant then people could not remain happy for a long time.
Moreover, after basic needs there are someother needs for every human to sustain his/her life and make him/her happy. Every citizen of a country demands medical assistance , jobs to sustain life soothly, education facilities, etc. These facilities are important for the wellfare and smooth flow of normal human's life. Without proper human medical facilities, nation could not remain happy, for instance : outbreak of plague in Europe caused by rats and due to this plague almost 1/3 of the Europe died, as a result most families lost thier loved onces and all lived in the sorrow. without jobs , nation's talent could not be able to reflect itself and youths would not be motivated and hence could take part in vandalizing the property , bantering , ogling etc.
While I agree that good rulers, artist or scientists could make a valuable contribution for the society/nation like providing a technique to grow crop in a large amount or prime minister like Narendra Modi, who could take various inteatives like Make in India, to grow employment but by mere few people and advancement could not help every single person of the nation and could not make it great until basic needs are not fullfilled.
In a nutshell, Authors reason is not merely enough to support his extreme claim about the surest indicator of great nation , as great nation could not become great until basic needs and happiness of their people are not met. I would suggest the author to consider author factors in order to make his/her reason more sound for the given claim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...s extreme and could be flawed easily. A nations greatness depends upon various factors ...
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Line 1, column 509, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rs apart from politics, arts and science . It would have been good, If the author ...
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Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs come" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'come' or 'to be come'.
Suggestion: come; to be come
... extreme claim. Humans basic needs come first, there is a saying in Hindi langu...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst, there is a saying in Hindi language Roti, Kapda, Makan which means Food, Clo...
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Line 4, column 394, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...traordinary efforts from any field like nations ruler , artists or scientists. If these...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fforts from any field like nations ruler , artists or scientists. If these basic n...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of a country demands medical assistance , jobs to sustain life soothly, education...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... the wellfare and smooth flow of normal humans life. Without proper human medical faci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is plague almost 1/3 of the Europe died, as a result most families lost thier lov...
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...oved onces and all lived in the sorrow. without jobs , nations talent could not be able...
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Suggestion: ,
...nd all lived in the sorrow. without jobs , nations talent could not be able to ref...
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...ld take part in vandalizing the property , bantering , ogling etc. While I ag...
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...out the surest indicator of great nation , as great nation could not become great ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... reason more sound for the given claim.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03609341826 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4880237982 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526539278132 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.4993425352 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.777777778 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219635607436 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727516110132 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587796558139 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136912820434 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522990060801 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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