With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communications, there is no doubt that every aspect of society- including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences - will benefit greatly from international influences
Globalization – process that makes world a small village – is considered a boon of today’s generation; whereby ramification of the global network facilitates in different fields have a huge impact in the betterment of the society. No doubt, one could not gainsay the advantages, the opportunities it has bestowed our society with. While, admittedly this global network has a significant impact in the today’s life, it is not rational to overlook the repercussions of its tail side and the dangers it lurks along with.
Today, we cannot imagine any sectors, any field to thrive without the support of the communication, economics and its intensive globalization. A person staying in one part of the globe can communicate with any another person on another part of the globe with the help of its sophisticated system. Internet, telephone have made the remarkable impact on any field of the society; in such, one could not stop himself breathing the syllable of its being a boon. A student can have access to any material from around the world which he could use for his intellectual enhancement; school could garnish its system with intensive system of communication like videoconferencing and e-learning; a business could handle a franchise; artist could sell himself and his arts; Science could reach over the thinking of humans - all due to the globalization in economics and communication sector, which is undoubtly a great boon to today’ss world.
On looking to the other side of the coin – one could not simply shut the book off just by singing the positive aspects that ramifications of commerce and communication have. They often do have some negative aspects which render it from being called a great boon to all of human and its different sectors. Many people have been the victims of the globalization and commercialization; many companies have faced bankrupty too. Yes, Scams, Fraud, hackings etc have grown concomitantly with the growth of the network. People being blackmailed, company getting moribund, large number of people going berserk due to scams are not new thing to hear. Similarly, internet, communication and its growth spreading crimes, extortion are not new to our eyes too.
In the nutshell, the global network have undoubtly a remarkable effect on the upliftment of the various field of the society and its true that imagination of its absence for mere a second is not acceptable today but it do have a dark shadow too which renders from being it called as the great and greatest boon to mankind and today’s society.
- With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communications there is no doubt that every aspect of society including education politics the arts and the sciences will benefit greatly from international influences 79
- The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment. 83
- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 812, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould reach over the thinking of humans - all due to the globalization in economic...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...a second is not acceptable today but it do have a dark shadow too which renders fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, similarly, so, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1377672209 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06798834798 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508313539192 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.320737759 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0714285714 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153349637761 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574936379934 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380845173332 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100257505423 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243729569292 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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