Human mind and machine superiery has always been a contriverial issue recent years. Due to advance in technology machines are improving every day and now they can much more than before. So, some may believe machines are superior to human mind. In my point of view, I reckon human mind has more abilities than machines for two reasons.
First of all, machines are designed by human and how much they are inteligent shows the inteligence of inventors. By other words, the abilities of a machine is a sign of the inventor's mind ability. As the statement mentioned, they are just a tools that human invents to make their jobs easier. For example, calculator may can do some mathematical operation musch faster than human but it does not mean the superior of calculator to the human. It shows the human inteligence that use some tools to make his or her work facile and expedite.
Moreover, even we consider machines as latest supercomputers, again human mind is superior to machines. Because these computers are design by humans and they tried to transfer thier ideas and point of view in solving problems to the computers. So, the computers do not have any independent view and thier views inherent from human minds. For instance, during the past decades we can find a lot of problems and scientific questions that solved by changing the views to the problem. We can name discovery of vaccine that scientist find a new way for fighting disease while it may not happen in computers. computer just search between different solutions that are designed for.
On the other hand, some maintain some machines like supercomputers could defeat human and it is an indication of superiority of machines. For example, they claim some supercomputers that not only could defeat ordinary people but also could win against some masters. However, this example shows the advancement of computers but not superiority of computers to human mind. Because, supercomputers can search between thousands of solutions faster than human and they could not design a new soultions. In addition, supercompuers fail to win against some masters anyway.
In conclusion, in my point of view, although machines and specially supercomputers have fast advancement in recent decades, human mind are superior to machines due to ability of human to think to the problems in different views if necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tool' or simply 'tools'?
Suggestion: a tool; tools
... the statement mentioned, they are just a tools that human invents to make their jobs e...
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Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computer
...e while it may not happen in computers. computer just search between different solutions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04859335038 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80513346423 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2870172723 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24597045133 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908682167371 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640787345935 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164634890307 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536521544944 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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