The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Some people insist that machines will never be able to surpass human beings as they are just a thing we made with our knowledge. However, I do not agree with this opinion. I believe that machines can be superior to us for the following reasons.
Firstly, machines nowadays can learn themselves. With the advent of novel technologies, especially regarding Artificial Intelligent (AI), machines are in the process of rapid evolution. In the past, we thought machines are for aiding harsh or repetitive tasks in the industrial fields. To be specific, they simply react to inputs or stimulations with programmed behaviors without a thinking process. However, machines these days can work in different ways. They can learn in a similar way to human beings and decide for themselves based on what they have learned. In other words, they do not need pre-works by human beings to make a behavior list one by one, and they can even handle situations that are not exactly the same as previous experiences. As machines are becoming smarter and smarter, I would like to say no one can guarantee anymore that human minds are always better than machines.
Secondly, machines are less likely to make mistakes when compared to human beings. There are no human beings who never make mistakes. Although we put a lot of time and effort to conduct a task or make a decision, it is too easy to make mistakes as we cannot be perfect all the time. On the other hand, machines have different characteristics. If all the considerations are successfully entered into machines, they will never make mistakes for performing a job or deciding something. This is because they are so good at following rules regardless of complexity. How we think they do their jobs perfectly can be found when we say “Wow, you were like machines” to those who conducted tasks perfectly. Considering the machine's abilities to make fewer mistakes than human beings, I believe machines have superiority over us in some cases.
It is true that human beings have better aspects than machines in some aspects. However, with the reasons including I abovementioned, we cannot assure that human minds are always better than machines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 470, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... work in different ways. They can learn in a similar way to human beings and decide for themselv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, in other words, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 28.8173652695 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96448087432 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79344160745 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527322404372 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3220322748 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5238095238 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 23.324526521 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.70786347227 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359988587948 0.218282227539 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1156196006 0.0743258471296 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748694756125 0.0701772020484 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248466136839 0.128457276422 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248750823222 0.0628817314937 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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