This topic raises the controversial issue of whether, if a goal worthy then, any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Indisputably, the way adopted should not be bad or evil. Nevertheless, sometime a passionate person forgets about good or bad and focus on the goal. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that any means adopted to achieve the goal are justifiable and would argue the authors statement.
First of all, following your goals is a passionate person job and it takes hard work and determination to achieve it successfully. I would like to point out that risks are worth taking for achieving the goal which is worth the risk. Also, setting goals in your life is one of the essential part of the life. But, only the determinant person wins. Also, winning or losing is part of it and sometimes the fear of losing makes a person take wrong or evil step to achieve it. Furthermore, to some people doing evil or adopting wrong way is fine as long as you don't hurt anyone or anyone's feeling. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that if a goal worthy then any means taken to achieve it is justifiable unless it harms someone's feeling or making a loss of someone. Admittedly, this is true. This is true especially when it comes to justifying. Setting goals is important part of life and achieving it gives the happiness of life. Also, makes your life worth living. However, the above argument does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Because, the way attained should not be deceitful.
In conclusion, although, if a goal is worthy then measures taken to attain it is justifiable. As long as some things are kept in to consideration and followed without breaking it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73615635179 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74156437786 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5987960618 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5263157895 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261243435059 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679493344225 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618530635219 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165241144796 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432503304158 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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