Participating in rituals, ceremonies, festivals and all auspicious events are adhering to the main part of our life styles nowadays. First of all, we have been determined as sociable animals for centuries which displays that our inclination to attend in gatherings and groups is undeniable from immemorial times. Second, attending in groups would soothe our desire to communicate with others. Moreover, this communicating is inherited to our genetics that could lead to bolster other abilities too. Finally, with noticing that communication had known to one of our basis needs, having counteraction in positive environments have resulted to assume our spirits more pacified than any other times.
Admittedly, the penchant of humans to aggregate in specific places together came out from the propensity to survive in hazardous world of our ancestors. However, nowadays with obviating those kinds of dangerous effects on our lives with benefiting the beneficial traits of modern life, it had depicted to us that avoiding harms was not the only the reason for our species to live in flocks. We feel better when we share our taught with each other, albeit, all the gatherings and parties that we could see had become irrefutable in today’s life is a radical line of reason for the participation in such kind of groups.
Surveys had illustrated that humans intended to live gregariously. This fact carries on several disparate reasons, one of them is, we feel more delighted when we communicate and sharing what we achieved through our destiny. That feeling of happiness is bolstering our mental situation, with regarding to, that ensue our enhanced motivation to face life problematic side and donates us more power to avoid fallacious decisions too. For instance, imagine a student that had been congratulated for his or her educational scores in an official ceremony in front of others. It is a certitude fact that the performance of the student would flourish after feeling gratified by others.
Similarly, ceremonies and all such kinds of happy events would augment our mental corroborations to interact more efficiently to pursue our goals in life. For example, dancing is an activity, which through that, we refine our souls from all detrimental and deleterious effects by being in a happy environment and forget all the occupations of ordinary life. Ceremonies are kind of events that provide us this susceptibility to empty ourselves and emancipate from all negative things.
In sum, attending to groups to survive had relegated to our inherent from hundred years ago. Likewise, the rebuttal of this fact that we are sociable animals is an erroneous assumption. Hence, we have been participating in gatherings not only for feeling sound and safe, but for feeling improved in different dimensions indeed. In fact, these amalgamations of people for positive purposes bolstering our quality of life by communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the only the'. Did you mean 'only the'?
Suggestion: only the
...icted to us that avoiding harms was not the only the reason for our species to live in flock...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...vive had relegated to our inherent from hundred years ago. Likewise, the rebuttal of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, second, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2474.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32043010753 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98354371934 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.972926194 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.7 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11746217989 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398861217085 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470873535803 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778793136265 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172492461298 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.