Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time.
This is a proven fact that truth is the initial stage of progress. However, it is also believed that truth always starts away from the traditions and conventions. Therefore, people consider truths as attacks upon their beliefs, which people are following from ages. Truth also means some new facts that are unknown to us. People do not want to deviate from the facts, which they have learnt from their ancestors, and it is true to say that shedding ones dogmas is often difficult. They feel that it is an attack on their wisdom.
If we look at the history of the world, we will find many examples where truth has generated commotions in the society. Different people have different views about the existence of God, life after death and origin of earth etc. For example, people took a long time to accept that the earth is round. Religious leaders and clergymen opposed this idea as it was against what they were teaching. Similarly, when Polish astronomer, Copernicus discovered that the earth goes round the sun and not vice versa, he was opposed by churches for many years. In fact he and his supporters were convicted for their ideas. Hence, it is very difficult to change the traditions that are followed by majority of people.
Similarly, when Darwin gave the theory of evolution, and challenged the old ideology, he was resisted by public. Nobody was ready to believe that apes were the ancestors of humankind. However, it is important to accept truths, otherwise it would hinder the growth of mankind. It is important for us to accept new ideas so as to bring out reforms in society and thus adopt new ideologies. It would open doors for various kinds of development. One should not blindly accept and follow old ideas or new truths. There should be enough scientific approach and explanations for everything.
However, there might be different reasons for this kind of uncomfortable reactions against truth. The first and the most responsible reason is the human nature. Most people will not prefer to change their ways of life and thinking, as it is accepted and prevalent from time unknown. They believe in what they are doing and experiencing for their whole life. The second factor is that truths often challenge the other persons authority. In order to save their status and honor, authoritarians oppose new ideas and truths. In getting their own way, they provoke the public. Sometimes these reactions go violent also.
However, these days, people are becoming more open minded. They are ready to accept new ideas. Our societies all over the world are getting more flexible and open to new truths. Hence, new ideas and truths are accepted peacefully and there are no violent commotions.
The conclusion is that important truths, which challenge the proven wisdom, always, face oppression. However, if these truths hold any ground, then these are accepted over a period of time after facing trials.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231046931408 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.167870036101 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0902527075812 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541516245487 0.0497285424764 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0613718411552 0.0444667217837 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110108303249 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0379061371841 0.0406280797675 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49441700968 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234657039711 0.030933414821 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00180505415162 0.0016655270985 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.0703971119134 0.0997080785238 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126353790614 0.0249443105267 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0180505415162 0.0148568991511 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2934.0 2732.02544248 107% => OK
No of words: 491.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97556008147 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352342158859 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24032586558 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162932790224 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114052953157 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49441700968 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 219.290929204 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513238289206 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.6092388167 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6194690265 165% => OK
Sentence length: 14.4411764706 23.380412469 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6532183256 59.4972553346 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 141.124799967 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4411764706 23.380412469 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.4737630286 51.4728631049 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.33757961783 1.64882698954 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275199307558 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0915625318703 0.123202303941 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676473622841 0.077325440228 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.436095907454 0.547984918172 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125809838891 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827666001708 0.161403998019 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662920376804 0.0892212321368 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307740702812 0.385218514788 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0752361976207 0.0692045440612 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173325497792 0.275328986314 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638108806 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.4325221239 201% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 7.22455752212 235% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.5995575221 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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