The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Today's burgeoning world reaching to the new horizons with rapidly augmenting success in every sector of the field. human development over the past years had dramatically increased and influencing more to humankind.
however, these innovations to simplify the life problems creating an issue with every step.some may argue that increasing rapid pace is conducive as it is for well being of humans. but, as a coin has two sides, every innovation has its, pros and cons.
Thus I strongly believe that the augmentation of the pace of life produces more problems as it gets improving for the following three reasons.
Firstly, over time, all great inventories are to process human life on the faster track and to make it much easier. There are a vast plethora of examples in history which reflects the statement and do hold the water.
foe instance innovation of mobile phones is the highest success for the human ever. any person who wants to explore new regions can take the help of google maps however, indirectly after some time that humans get staunched on maps for every little thing.
he might lose the ability to think and become a slave of technology. same situation with a simple alarm clock. people use to get up early with natural indications of sunrise or cockerel that is rooster crow but over time this dependency has increased and humans get lazy.
Secondly, as we are running for money in the rat race we are forgetting about our mental as well as a physical health issue. we overlooked the physical strength and simply move forward for the money. we are afraid that we will miss the exact time train which leads me to pay cut.
from micro to macro scale every minuscule detail we are overlooking and running in the world race. According to a survey of the world peace and happiness index, more than 70% of the world population is not happy because of the content race of life.
everyone wants to succeed. no one has time for one another and eventually, we all forgot the value of humanity. we have invented health bands, Fitbit apple watches to track out physical health on contrary we overlooking this stuff for the sake of more money.
this paradox is detrimental to human life as it may lead to serious consequences.
Moreover, as we are bound by the time and dancing on the needle of the clock we are no more mentally connected as we are unable to take a time of ourselves. video calls, video conferences might have made ease of connecting people but with a paucity of emotional factors.
we must understand valuing, respect for each other, and take time to enjoy with your loved ones. we must understand this all we are doing for our families and loved ones and technology is just a medium to make our difficulties easy so we should not depend on it. however, some may argue that increasing the pace of life is a lucrative deal as it may help to succeed.
In totality, we must remain at the pace of life but not dependent on innovation completely as this can pernicious to our life. The inclusion of technology should be thoughtful and limited usage for need only. Thus I believe that the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2636.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 560.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70714285714 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54373730754 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 855.0 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9110605717 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8965517241 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3103448276 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41379310345 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223922107762 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659345417764 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135488244401 0.0758088955206 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967148310181 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115237393956 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.