The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
"Time and tide waits for none."
The modern day city dweller has imbibed this aphorism in to his daily life. I also firmly believe in the same. So, I won't agree with the argument presented. This statement has been highly generalized and we cannot say for sure whether rapid pace of life has solved or created more problems. We need a comparison between the present and previous problems to analyze whether that is really the case.
Fast pace of life is the way of large cities and it is fast taking over smaller towns. Urbanisation has made its way not only through major cities but also through the minds of people living in it. Fast life ensures that the person gets fast money, spends it even more speedily and enjoys life to the fullest. Even social needs of people are getting fulfilled. For example, urban places have more facilities for healthcare. A city dweller gets much better emergency health services than a rural person will get. For education too, the fast paced city is much more capable for providing a world class study program. Enetertainment, travel, financial planning everything happens at a quick pace and it relieves a person from his responsibilities early in life. The person can enjoy the life when he is able to rather than waiting for retirement to enjoy life.
Also, it is not right to say the fast pace has increased problems. Urbanisation and fast life are natural ways of evolution and slowly everyone will be acquainted to this lifestyle. We adapt ourselves everyday and the better practices will eventually thrive in the course of time. Even if we try to stop the natural flow, we will fail miserably. So it would be best to get used to the fast life and enjoy the fruits it has to offer. There will always be problems whether we live a slow life or fast life and so the statement that problems have increased is not quite right. Newer challenges require newer approaches to solve them and shutting out the problems won't give us the solution.
Only few of the aspects where this fast pace of life has failed are family bonding and mental health. With increase in pace of everyday life, people have lesser time for their loved ones which has eventually led to nuclear families and distanced individuals. This can later lead to mental health problems which need to be taken into consideration. But again, these matters depend on each individual and could be taken care with right work-life balance.
So, I don't agree with the argument and believe that the fast pace of life is inevitable. We need to adapt and adopt the right measures to get the best of both the scenarios. If the person lives a fast life, he needs to take some time out every now and then to connect to the roots where he came from. Spend time with family and lead a more meaningful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 202, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d to this lifestyle. We adapt ourselves everyday and the better practices will eventuall...
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Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... with right work-life balance. So, I dont agree with the argument and believe tha...
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Line 10, column 239, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...st life, he needs to take some time out every now and then to connect to the roots where he came f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, well, as to, even so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68282828283 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44252366308 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492929292929 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.709533175 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.9310344828 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0689655172 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27586206897 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270256559694 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708407690281 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060774381349 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130172384295 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625572590387 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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