Given the question of rapid life problems, the first reaction of most people is either stress or environmental issues. It is true that fast life brings modern people to a certain extent: the pace of continuous life brings more problems than being comfortable. I agree with the idea that quick life brings us more problems than before, although our lives have radically changed in some respects.
It is recognized that fast life improves our efficiency, especially in the industrial field. In the past, we made the production mainly by hand. Today we rely on machines because the increasing speed of life leaves us little time to do this work. Many activities have occupied people's lives and are specially arranged for every second. Also, hasty life drives people to spend their time more clearly. We are aware of the importance of retaining opportunities because we have a little time to think too much before any decision. It seems as if our lives have been compressed for a certain period of time, and we spend every minute usefully.
However, things are not always positive. Rapid life speed brings us a potential risk except for benefits. Today, people spend less time making food themselves because they do not have time to cook. Instead, they turn to junk food. Every day at lunchtime, not hard to see at McDonald's, people are waiting for the food that will be served only in a few minutes. The following problems, such as obesity and increased stomach cancer, show that eating junk food is harmful to human health. However, even with the faults of eating junk food, McDonald's consumers continue to go to the fast food store at lunchtime because the fast life does not leave them time to sit down and enjoy a well cooked meal.
Also, when it comes to the environmental issue, we can not avoid the issue of air pollution caused by rapid life speed. People today like driving to where they want to go. Air emissions from vihecles are the main cause of air pollution in most of the world's major cities. However, people seem to have no reason to give up driving their cars. In fact, the current lifestyle of most city residents leaves them little time to move around. It seems that driving to work is the best option because it is a good way to shorten time on the road. In fact, our pace of rapid life rarely allows us to slow down and, therefore, increase the environmental problems that have existed since the Industrial Revolution. From this point, the increasing pace of living brings us problems that may not have existed in the past.
All in all, we have to admit that the modern lifestyle brings us more problems because of its fast speed, despite some problems that have already been resolved. Today, human life is just like a car that is not controlled, is headed for fasting, and places itself in many difficult conditions resulting from speeding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 589, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ives have been compressed for a certain period of time, and we spend every minute usefully. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, except for, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2382.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 499.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77354709419 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42208723216 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498997995992 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7031139377 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4814814815 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7037037037 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140905659964 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414179053677 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383340124631 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919579472852 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418326027048 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.