The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There is no time in the history that the people's life pace has been more rapid than the past several decades. As the pace of life becomes faster and faster, some people are worried that it causes more problems than it solves. As far as I am concerned, I think their worry is superfluous for the following reasons.
People who are in favor of the prompt statement may argue that it is terrible that people's span of attention is getting shorter and they no longer peruse any information now. Admittedly, receiving flood of information every day, people have learned that they will never be able to read all of them and thus learned to quickly scan through the given information. In my opinion, it is totally a positive change and critical ability for modern people to not wasting time perusing through all the materials; instead they should just quickly pick out what is important to them.
Moreover, the rapid pace of life saves people more time to devote themselves in truly meaningful matters. Different from people in the generations of horse and buggy, modern people have cars, trains, ferries and flight. People now do not need to walk for for hours to work or school as before and thus have more time for other activities such as socializing, learning and traveling. Although some people may argue that these improvements get people more stressful, I believe people are favored by it because they are more productive every day and have more time that they can schedule for more meaningful using.
In addition, rapid changes in the world urges people to develop and improve technologies faster and thus enhance the well-beings of human society rapidly. As companies and research teams are competing with each other for developing the next-generation technologies, it benefits general people by keeping improving their life quality. Take, for example, Tesla's coming into market which will make a big change in our daily life. If Tesla can become common in use, theoretically, the possibility of car accident will drop dramatically. In this case, we are happy to see Tesla improving their technologies diligently and rapidly.
In conclusion, the advantages rapid pace of life brings us outweighs the drawbacks. Not only because some of the seemly negative changes such as short attention span are actually reasonable and conducive adjustment, but also the rapid pace saves us a lot of time for more important matters. Although it might sometimes make people's work more stressful, eventually, the effort will contribute to our society and make the world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07242990654 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69773421459 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3370606312 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.071428571 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155176186625 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652914279754 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507919957943 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981544466566 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486892110899 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.