“It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data”
We live in an age of innovation. The world has seen many revolutions of industrializations and is currently embracing the fourth industrialization, the digital industrialization. The innovations lead by maverick scientists throughout the course of time, was on the basis of experimental evidences. I agree with the statement that it is pertinent to theorize and jump to conclusion only when one has enough data, in order to reap its reward.
To begin with, conducting experiments helps one to understand the shortcomings and help to revise certain parameters which could be beneficial in attaining success. This notion is applicable in many areas of expertise. Take the example in the healthcare industry. Radical scientists and doctors spent time to find a medicine that could expunge diseases that are precarious in one health. Small pox was one disease that plagued the human life, in the nineteenth century. However, the advancements in medical sciences and technology helped the scientists in eradicating the diseases. However, the development of this weapon against smallpox was not developed overnight. It is with exhausting experiments that scientists were able to bring the weapon out to the light. Imagine the scenario, wherein theorizing a thesis and implementing the usage of medicine! The result could have been devastating and could have led to the destruction of human life. Therefore, it is pertinent to conduct experiments and glean enough data before the procedure of theorizing.
Secondly, conducting experiments helps in paving the way to the future. It is to be understood that an innovation does not stop when its purpose has been achieved. It could lead to something new, even to a new problem that requires indivduals to thin outside the box. Consider the advent of the 19th century. The invention of automobiles spawned an industry that grew from a mode of transport to a mode of luxury. Initially automobile was considered as a mode of transport, with limited speed and inefficient engines. However, continuous and persevering experiments conducted by ingenious individuals lead to the modernization of automobiles. This includes the use of race cars, luxury cars and so forth. The concept of ergonomics paved a way to comfort and susupension. Nowadays creation of electric cars and self driving are popular thanks to the fourth industrialization. What started as a mere concept of moving an individual from one place to another has paved way to the future. Also with this is the growing concern of environment. This has enabled individuals to find new susrces of energy such as renewable energy , electric cars and so on. Without experimental data and research this would not have been possible and the world could not have reached the lace it is now.
To conclude, the world is advancing as each moment counts by. In order to understand and maintain the complex and convolute nature of this advancement, one must rely on experimental data, rather than theorize before conducting any experiments. History has proven this. Experimental research is the way for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...srces of energy such as renewable energy , electric cars and so on. Without experi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld not have been possible and the world could not have reached the lace it is no...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...moment counts by. In order to understand and maintain the complex and convolute n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2610.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26209677419 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17919160317 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520161290323 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8371264714 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111531366944 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230491182919 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448676974157 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814530528461 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303322130623 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.