It is often necessary, even desirable , for the political leaders to withhold information from the public.
Political leader is an important representative of a country. A political leader can bring avert for the country and also can bring evil consequence. People elect them as a country representative and for the betterment of the people. But, sometimes political leader pretends well in front of people but not actually they are. I personally agree that for the betterment of the country a political leader should the moral, loyal to the people that means they should expose important information to the people.
Firstly, by keeping the information hide they always try to malpractice their power. Often they misuse their freedom, power against general people and moreover, try to loot the people. For example, in our country Bangladesh, most of the political leader is corrupted and dictatorial and can do anything worse for their benefit.
Besides, sometimes political leader covert important issue about the country like tax, administrative information etc. without regarding the people's view. For example, in Bangladesh most people are poor and the student who is not got a chance in public university are admitted to private university which is one of the expensive education section for study. The government of our country declared that a special vat will be added with tuition without considering the opinion of the student. Thus, this type of issue must be considered before making the decision.
However, if every information is exposed to the public is not a good idea. For instance, in Bangladesh terrorist attacks is one of the intimidating issues in the present year. If every information is exposed, the terrorist will know about the vital information of a country. We all know about Osama-Bin-Laden who was the major suspect in the 9/11 attacked and finally caught by the USA. If the terrorist knew the USA movement then Laden never be caught. Therefore, some political information never withholds to the public.
To conclude, every issue has pros and cons, with must be careful such thing. No matter how much better form anyone try to introduce everything there is always remain something behind of it. Thus, a political leader should be exposed that information where people's decision is most important and withhold those information where country's safety is important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...attacked and finally caught by the USA. If the terrorist knew the USA movement the...
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Line 10, column 116, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
.... No matter how much better form anyone try to introduce everything there is always...
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Line 10, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...to introduce everything there is always remain something behind of it. Thus, a politic...
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Line 10, column 305, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...decision is most important and withhold those information where countrys safety is important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 368.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24456521739 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84276018057 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513586956522 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1512893075 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.70786347227 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280006764266 0.218282227539 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844038892705 0.0743258471296 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785278817965 0.0701772020484 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150317967768 0.128457276422 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246673300425 0.0628817314937 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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