it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved .
Firstly i would like to discuss about the topic named it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved .I'd agree with the point because people aren't remebering the past traditions due to the current trend.
secondly,let us consider a people living in well developed cities like hyderabad and chennai and so on..
here they are addicted to different kind of atmosphere where people will have less knowledge about the culture
Thirdly,Due to the dramastic change in people mind also results in the less knowledge about the countries tradition ,however parents aren't showing much intrest about celebrating the festivals in the old traditions.this is because of lack of intrest and current trend
In the earlier days people use to celebrate their festivals tradtionally .they use to have a tradtional wear and also every indivudual has known about the culture.respect children and elders are the best things you find in our country
Finally i would like to conclude that though there is a lack of cultural tradition in india still india plays a major role for their tradition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 2235.4752809 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1978021978 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78988893256 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 704.065955056 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 23.0359550562 260% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 287.337200283 60.3974514979 476% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.333333333 118.986275619 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.6666666667 23.4991977007 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.0 5.21951772744 651% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209248700061 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167801454615 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155355454476 0.0758088955206 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101648465586 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13052226873 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 14.1392134831 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 48.8420337079 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.2143820225 232% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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