It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations
shape your position.
Social groups are an inevitable part of our lives, since it is the only way that we can validate our existence in a particular society. It is important to maintain a good impression in front of our peers, and in our other social interactions, which gives us a prominent status in the society. But, it would be inappropriate to think of it as the primary way to define one's life.
All of us want to be recognized for our good work in the society, and thus we tend to keep our public image as clean as possible. However, it can be argued that socially identified and accepted definition of someone is not entirely true. It is not recommended for society to define any person. Each person is an individual and has his/her own traits that hardly anyone is aware of. In India, there's a popular phrase: "Elephant uses different teeth to chew, and has different teeth to show." In this analogy, we understand that the social identification that one portrays in front of the society is not a reliable definition of the person itself.
On the other hand, we should acknowledge that our social identification is a major part of writing our own definition. For example, John who is extremely good in his academics, will be known as one of the best minds of the society, which is undoubtedly true. Thus, his social identification as a "Smart person" won't be wrong. He will be identified as smart because he possesses that trait.
On the contrary, it would be inappropriate to ignore the fact that the John can be good at singing, or he might be bad at sports. So 'smart person' is not the only thing which would make a proper definition of John. His other hobbies such as singing, or any other things which are unknown to society should add up to the definition of "John".
In addition to this, 'introvert' is a popular term to define shy people. These people do not tend to open up to other people quickly. Their social identification is always conveyed as "Shy, less talkative, tantamount etc." But it should not be necessarily considered as true. Shyness is a characteristic of not opening up in front of a group of people. A shy person maybe extremely friendly and open in front of his family, and close friends; and we would never know because his social appearance would
always remain as shy. A person who is shy in front of everyone, can be very annoying in person, which is a false representation of his social identification.
Finally, it can be seen that it is not necessary that our social identification must be the primary factor of definition of our lives. Yes, it can be considered as a factor, but it would be exaggeration that it plays major role in definition. This criteria varies from person to person and is can never be confined in some set of rules or policies in order to get to know someone.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hink of it as the primary way to define ones life. All of us want to be recogniz...
^^^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...at hardly anyone is aware of. In India, theres a popular phrase: 'Elephant uses d...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rue. Thus, his social identification as a 'Smart person' wont be wrong....
^
Line 12, column 244, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...that it plays major role in definition. This criteria varies from person to person a...
^^^^
Line 12, column 258, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'vary'.
Suggestion: vary
...major role in definition. This criteria varies from person to person and is can never ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2359.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68986083499 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95699699816 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435387673956 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2637179356 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2916666667 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9583333333 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128198323595 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455249675347 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379718338483 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766379400693 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038188183906 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hink of it as the primary way to define ones life. All of us want to be recogniz...
^^^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...at hardly anyone is aware of. In India, theres a popular phrase: 'Elephant uses d...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rue. Thus, his social identification as a 'Smart person' wont be wrong....
^
Line 12, column 244, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...that it plays major role in definition. This criteria varies from person to person a...
^^^^
Line 12, column 258, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'vary'.
Suggestion: vary
...major role in definition. This criteria varies from person to person and is can never ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2359.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68986083499 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95699699816 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435387673956 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2637179356 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2916666667 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9583333333 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128198323595 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455249675347 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379718338483 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766379400693 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038188183906 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.