It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The speaker asserts that the way to define ourselves is through our identification with social groups. It is true that social groups are so different that people cannot identify it easily. However, as a human being, people must find out who they are in the society. Therefore, Identification with social groups is the only way that can help people realize themselves. I strongly agree with the speaker.
To begin with, since human being lives in social context, social identification, which can help us recognize ourselves, is necessary; As a social animal, human is relating to his or her social partners, such as colleague, classmate, and family. And this means that human have different roles in the social context. In order to find their direction of life, human must find out what kinds of roles they play in the society. For example, students must find out what they need, and develop themselves through education. After graduated, students can engage in what they like or what they want to do, such as being a lawyer, an engineer, or a doctor. Without social identification, human cannot realize who they are.
Further, human will benefit from identifying characteristics of social groups, through which they can understand themselves better. For example, when attending the schools, students search for a club. With clubs, schools can combine same kinds of students, whereas students can find out their merits in the clubs. In the clubs, students could be a director, a member belonging to event planning, or a member belonging to public relations department. Through identifying their roles in the club, students can know what kind of roles they like, and it can be analogy to vocation. In sum, human can benefit from identifying their social groups.
On the other hand, the things that people could not identify social groups has a negative effect on themselves. If people is incapable of knowing what is their roles in the society, they will lose their way, even become unfamiliar with themselves. For instance, Lobo Wolf Girl, a girl was seen running on all fours alongside a pack of wolves going after a herd of goats. Due to lacking ability to identify herself in the social context, she was unable to exhibit a human’s characteristics. In brief, because people live in society, they must find out their identification in the society.
To sum up, human realize themselves through identification with social groups, and benefit from social groups. If people cannot recognize their identification in society, they will lose the direction of life. So, I totally agree what the speaker says.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... has a negative effect on themselves. If people is incapable of knowing what is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in brief, kind of, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7736792537 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447552447552 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1546211537 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.56 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.16 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148744932907 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556939287021 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563890418186 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1078121477 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525278726816 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.