Justice of law is the basic requirment for a democratic government, because the people under ruling by the authority will behave themselves with the confine of Laws. Any impair jurisdiction will bring more harmful infulence to the people and the government. In my opinion, Law is the most confirm regulation for all of us should to obey, apart from the conditions invovled by laws, where the moral field control we can discuss about the flexibility of situations, times and places.
To begin with, as a citizen of a country, we must obey the law and fight against any behavior of violtation. When you drive a car, you must hew the rules of traffic, if you pass the corner without the noticification of traffic lights which just turned red, there may be a serious traffic accicent waiting for you. If you do not document the right tax files to the IRS, you may get warned of investigated by the government. What's worse , if the country people all make fraud on tax documents, the government will get less even no tax revenue which may cause the bankrupt of authority and everything goes to chaos without the management of the government. So there is little discussion of what situation shuould be punishment when the people violate the law.
On the other hand, the authority should make a specific standard of laws at first. Once we make the rules and everyone should take it as the most important standard to behave themselves. It is a symbol of progress that a nation that can regulate its laws by the time changing. Due to the development of the whole society as we are experincing through. There is no need for Cyber-priavacy protection decads ago because of the technology of the Internent did not play an essential role in our daily life. Now almost everything is to be connected to the Internet, the importance of preventing the privacy leakage is more and more fundmental to the country, besides the people, the authrority also require the nation-privacy protection of Internet due to the Snoden affair who debunked the top secret files of the US. So the legislation of Internent privacy is on the stage of history. Lots of countries instituted or revised the relevant laws immediately.
There are also some fileds that the Laws is not the best choice whereas the morality does. In china there are a lot of debate about the legislation that the adults must take care of their parents by law. As I put it into consideration, China is a traditional country which respect the old is a basic moral rule of the coutry, I doubt the requirement of legislation for taking care of the old, it is the area of morality.
In conclusion, the law are not flexible when the crime happens in my opinion.
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 50
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- People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, so, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74152542373 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79130142742 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516949152542 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6268714559 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234753728712 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588175481262 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521571214179 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111192150705 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057308397865 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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