Leaders are made when demands are forced upon them.
Write an essay in which you explain the degree to which you agree or disagree with the statement. In
the process of developing your opinion, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might
not hold true.
Generally there are at least one leader in one team explicitly or implicitly. Header’s leadership significantly influence success of team’s goal. Some people believe regardless of others requirement leaders are created themselves, while others believe demand such as team’s goal make team leader.
I agree with the statement that when some demands are required, team leaders are created. A variety field examples support this statement.
To begin with, many presidents have placed leader position due to demand of citizens. Specific objective is set based on citizens’ needs and president is elected to process such objectives. During presidential term endless new demands are required to president and this is the reason why president is exist.
For example, when united states suffering from economy crisis, US citizen demand economic recovery to 44th president Barack Obama. During crisis period, the poor got poorer and suck poverty cause lots of significant problem. Impoverished people are easily attacked by serious disease because of their weak environment. For them paying medical expense without any other support. Obama who become leader to figure out the best solution propel Obama care. Obama care is health ensurance policy to reduce people’s burden about health and expense. Successively people require job opportunity to save the economy. Due to this demand that is forced upon him, he made an effort to create jobs and lots of US citizen could finally become participants in economy activities. As a result, Obama’s policy to improve economy satisfy US citizen and their other demand placed him on next president.
Furthermore, not only in politics in other fields especially where team has clear objectives leaders can be assigned due to those objectives. Sports teams play games to achieve common goal, victory of the team. Team members and fans request leading for victory and that make leader.
To illustrate, famous basketball player Michael Jeffery Jordan in United States became leader of his team Chicago Bulls. Jordan is talented player proved by a number of selection record as MVP. Chicago Bulls’ fans and members want victory of team and this demand made the best player Jordan become a leader of the team. To meet their and also Jordan’s goal, Jordan associate individual skill and task to team members that make improvement of teamwork. He also help members mental training to stay equanimity. Consequently, Bulls could win the game several times. Jordan was just a player with no special ability or experience related to leadership, but people’s objective made him become leader.
As this cogent example demonstrates, leaders can be allocated due to others requirement.
In summary, the statement that demand creative leaders is valid.
Certain circumstance can demand someone to become a leader and he or she is not a congenitally selected person, that is everyone can be leader.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'leaders'?
Suggestion: leaders
Generally there are at least one leader in one team explicitly or implicitly. H...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...and this is the reason why president is exist. For example, when united states suff...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 690, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun US seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of (US)'.
Suggestion: lots of (US)
...m, he made an effort to create jobs and lots of US citizen could finally become participan...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 461, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...t make improvement of teamwork. He also help members mental training to stay equanim...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, so, while, at least, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37960954447 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69470898519 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572668112798 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9089155079 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3666666667 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114367322808 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345428693451 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446223425254 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688566531282 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528262780968 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'leaders'?
Suggestion: leaders
Generally there are at least one leader in one team explicitly or implicitly. H...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...and this is the reason why president is exist. For example, when united states suff...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 690, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun US seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of (US)'.
Suggestion: lots of (US)
...m, he made an effort to create jobs and lots of US citizen could finally become participan...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 461, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...t make improvement of teamwork. He also help members mental training to stay equanim...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, so, while, at least, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37960954447 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69470898519 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572668112798 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9089155079 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3666666667 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114367322808 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345428693451 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446223425254 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688566531282 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528262780968 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.