leadership needs cooperation than competition
Leadership means to encourage people for a certain cause and to accomplish the task showing right directions to them. From the prime minister who leads the government of a whole nation, to the football captain who leads an eleven member team, everyone exhibits leadership. Leaders require qualities like empathy, cooperation, guidance, persistence and vision. Each also needs the specific set of professional skill. Like, prime minister is a politician, football captain is footballer.
Young people are the future leaders in government, industry, or other fields. The age of young people is also perfect time for grooming all types of intelligence. By instilling in them a sense of cooperation is a great way to prepare for leadership. But not the only best way. A helpful, charming teacher might be of no real benefit if that teacher can not teach. On the other hand, students will not like a strict knowledged person without sense of humour.
Although, competition is not the only way to prepare for leadership, it is indeed helpful. Human minds tend to delay over works. They start working on deadlines and competition. People only work when time is running out or someone like them is winning over. Competition creates the urge to learn better, to work better. Thus, we improve day by day. Without competition we would have never advanced this far. For being a leader, one must show the highest level of qualities. So that the followers always feel confident.
We need cooperation too. This quality makes us humane. We work together, we work for people for a better future.
Along with these a leader must posses impeccable skills in their subset. Leadership is a mix of all those qualities that make this job so much respectable.
Thus, the best way for a society is to prepare with all the resources and skills like cooperation and competition in its young people for a better leadership tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and competition. People only work when time is running out or someone like them...
^^
Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
.... Competition creates the urge to learn better, to work better. Thus, we improve day b...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 476, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...st show the highest level of qualities. So that the followers always feel confident. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06918238994 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76762433725 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6069434152 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2307692308 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.88461538462 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187037817376 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490537853347 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076602159386 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982779986 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408693682222 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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