This topic raises a controversial issue of whether or not the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life make people more dependent. Indisputably, it may be true that luxuries and conveniences could make people lazy, nevertheless, it makes one more efficient. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that it makes people dependable, and would argue that, the terms “luxury” and “conveniences” are quite subjective, its meaning may varies drastically with time. The meaning may also vary when one moves up the ladder of social hierarchy from poor and under privileged to the rich and high caste.
First of all, the meaning of “conveniences” and “luxuries” could change with time, what is a necessity to today, was a only a luxury until a while ago, to illustrate, let us look at an example of our own grandparents, in order to communicate something who is living in a different place, they used to send a person all the way to that place to pass the message, and the came letters followed by phones and emails, today we have become so dependent on phones that will let us talk to people who are almost thousand miles away. One cannot imagine life without such a necessity, but it is important to note that it was only a “luxury” decades ago.
Secondly, conveniences definitely make a man more efficient. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that it helps one make a better use of time, and save his time for something more important and that involves a lot of thinking, for example, if one were to make a financial plan for the year, he could spend time on thinking how he could strategically reduce his expenses rather than spend time on doing tedious calculations of his spendings from last year, that could easily be performed by a calculator.
Admittedly, one may argue that it is making people highly dependent on other things to get work done. But the terms “Conveniences” and “Luxuries” may be subjective, what is a luxury for a “middle class family” may be a “necessity” for an affluent family, having a car can be a good example to this. Conveniences also differ from places to places, say a rain water harvesting system is necessary in hot places, but only a convenience to have in places with abundant water. What is important is the clear specification of the place when someone is making such a statement.
In conclusion, although conveniences and luxuries make a person lazy, I disagree and would argue that, it helps one become more efficient and manage his time better. It is also important to note that the terms “luxury” and “conveniences” are quite subjective, and one has to give more details when making such a statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66937203283 2.79657885939 131% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491304347826 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.77640449438 619% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.821404743 60.3974514979 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.428571429 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998393829292 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516885709823 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032378268166 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692183148858 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377763996832 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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