The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
"No good thing ever comes out of comfort zone". This a popular saying which insinuates that the luxuries that we enjoy is precluding us from developing. With more convenience,we tend to forget our self-development.
The conveniences of the contemporary world are impeding us from developing into our true-selves. Let's take the example of the social media especially Instagram. It is readily available on everyone's phone and people are actually addicted to it. The convenience we get is that we can meet the people easily and have conversation with them readily. However we lose the real essence of the conversation and the direct meeting because of online meeting. The conversation that happens over face to face is very different from the one that happens over online. Without the actual meetings and conversations, we tend to lose our one of the prime quality of being sociable. So just by conversing over online through a social media app, we won't learn nuances that are very much essential when we are having a real conversation. Thus with the convenience that we get with social media, which is being able contact anyone readily, we lose the real thing that keeps the bond stronger.
Another example of such a convenience ruining our ability to be independent is online food ordering facility. These days getting food delivered to our home is very easy . Everything is done by finger tips and within hour of ordering , the ready to consume food is available at your step without evening dropping a sweat. This is potentially hindering our ability to cook. Because of our indolence, we restrain ourselves from a very good habit of cooking. If there were are no food ordering facilities, we would have forced ourselves to cook developing a habit for to cook which is definitely going to help in the long run. But as solution to our problem is readily available , we are never bothered about development of the skills that is going to make us independent.
Similarly we have readily available cab facilities because of which we restrict ourselves from using the public transport. When we go out and use the public transport, we get learn numerous things either by interacting with other people or by observing. Of course using a public transport is not as convenient as using a cab but the things that we get to learn from the former are just priceless.
However , there are things that makes strong and independent though they are conveniences to us like the daily information that we get from news which might be available on television or over internet. This definitely help in improving an individual.
Conclusively, we can say that luxuries and conveniences of life are hindering our ability to explore our own skills and develop into our true potential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...s from developing. With more convenience,we tend to forget our self-development. ...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...s from developing into our true-selves. Lets take the example of the social media es...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nd have conversation with them readily. However we lose the real essence of the convers...
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Line 3, column 819, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...when we are having a real conversation. Thus with the convenience that we get with s...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... food delivered to our home is very easy . Everything is done by finger tips and w...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... finger tips and within hour of ordering , the ready to consume food is available ...
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Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion to our problem is readily available , we are never bothered about development...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...hat is going to make us independent. Similarly we have readily available cab facilitie...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
... using the public transport. When we go out and use the public transport, we get le...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...people or by observing. Of course using a public transport is not as convenient as using a cab but...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he former are just priceless. However , there are things that makes strong and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, similarly, so, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99784482759 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89318685366 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484913793103 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2807348493 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.76 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.56 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.32 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139176774156 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440896360999 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450055086237 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866511206785 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171361023769 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.