major cities
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Major cities are the backbone of every country, as they provide employment to a lot of people, a major contributor to the country's economy.These cities contribute more to GDP as compared to any other cities, having more amenities when compared to others. These cities are the dream cities for many not only across the country but across the globe because they are getting much more as they could not get in their city. And all this cannot be possible without government financial support.
Investors from all over the world try to invest in major cities of any country. Many people come from various places in the country in search of employment, as they will get a lot of opportunities in these cities. They are the hub for various MNC and most of the startups were started there only, for Example, California is among the major cities of the USA and most of the startups that are now a big giant in the corporate world were stated there only like Google, Facebook, Microsoft, etc. For a country to make its major cities popular among the tourist, investors, they have to provide financial support to these cities so they can thrive.
Providing financial assistance to these cities does not mean focus on these cities only and doing nothing for others. Yes, the government has to focus more on major cities as they are contributing more to the growth of a country in various ways, but they also try to make other cities of a country as their major one. And for this, they have to focus on other cities also, by providing financial support to them, for example, the GDP of California alone is around 2 trillion dollars alone, which is more than the many countries in the world, but the USA is not only focusing alone on California, they try to make others state like California.
Whenever we heard any country name , the first thing that comes into our mind is their major countries, for example, if we talk about the USA the name that came's into mid is California or New York, not even the capital. So, we can also say that a country is known for its major cities and its government duty to make them world class and famous and this can be possible if they get financial support form the government of there country.
In conclusion, governments should focus on major cities because financial help from government will definitely help cities, which in turn will help government itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78066037736 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66760029792 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431603773585 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1655409497 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.923076923 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6153846154 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374909583281 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177191318314 0.0831039109588 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119381171735 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251411591633 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668728488184 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.