Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
The prompts claim that we can learn usually much more from like-minded people those whose views contradicts our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate opinions and reasons on the given topic. Some of them go for them, while other can't argue at it all. I partially agree with given claims that we can usually learn much more people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. The three reasons and examples supporting the given statements are given in following paragraph.
First of all, most of the people are prefer to live the major city like major city of, US is New York, India is New Deli, Nepal is Kathmandu and so on. because there are any facilities are available. For instance, I have take New York city, Which is large city and also capital of the United State America. In a day there are around millions of people travelling for their job, visiting and so on. If the government give the any financial supporting than, these are used for personal safety, maintenance and upgrades, and so on, that's why government should supports the major city of government.
However, All the thing are not cover only in major city in a country. For example, In Nepal, There are much more thing are cover in outside the city like Mount Everest, Chitwan National Park , Lantang National Park and so on. If the government only support the major city than its become shadows and tourists can't reach that place properly for visiting. Hence, Government can not focus only the major cities.
Lastly, another example that support the given claims is that big city of Kathamandu and small city of Bhaktapur, In Bhaktapur there are lots of Neplese culture. If the government financial support for only Kathamandu city then, the culture of Bhaktapur may be remove slowly due to lac of financial supports that's why financial support must be equally distributed.
In conclusion/ to sum up/ in summary, the reasons and examples presented support the claim/position that are partially agree in given statement. The essay highlights the financial supporting in major as well as minor city. The examples of New York city in America and Kathamandu as well as Bhaktapur city of Nepal are illustrate supporting in my opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in summary, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02784810127 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62095909719 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496202531646 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4717002736 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.526315789 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36842105263 5.21951772744 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26744786026 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872775796924 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729356537154 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165327717331 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742668759762 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.