Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such language from becoming extinct.
According to the speaker government should act to prevent the languages of their country as they are being lost. I agree insofar with the speaker's view as the government play a huge role in preserving the languages, culture and tradition of the country. However, is only effort of government sufficient to preserve such languages? Don't the people residing in the country have some responsibility towards it?
Admittedly, government can make the use of their national language by adding them in national curriculum until the school level which helps the children to understand their own language. Also the government can imply rules such as using their own native languages in official work. Along with the effort of government, the locals living in the country can play a vital role for preserving their language. While communicating at home they can use such language; can teach their children about the importance of own language and customs as these are the thing that reflects the country's identity. As a paradigm, we can take the Newar community of Kathmandu valley. Although they use nepali or english language to communicate at school and other places, they use their own newari language at home. This culture has not only helped to preserve their language but also have increased the feeling of oneness in them.
We cannot deny the fact that to sustain in the outer world, nowadays it has become a compulsion to learn the much speaking language such as English, French, Spanish and others. Due to the increased competition and to become more efficient, people have started using other language rather than their own. However, although these language are necessary for one to become successful, yet people can learn and use their own native language inside their own country inorder to preserve them.
Owing all these, i individually feel that although the government can act to make the language becoming extant, it is also the responsibility of the local people to preserve and use their own language as they are the one who can truly save the language from becoming extinct.
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...ather than their own. However, although these language are necessary for one to become success...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06086956522 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64497478616 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48115942029 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6115244659 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320554098404 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133409538639 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913582743742 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244716504188 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467918412766 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.