The modern age is the age of information. At present people who know more information is consider as the more powerful person. Now information is the key and the main sources of information are mass media,internet,social media. Everyday people get thousand of information. As people face a lots of information at the same time they can not pay attention in all the topics but the can pay focus on their topics of interest.As there are a lots of information available people make up their ability to sort the large information according to their interest.
Facebook, which consider as one of the most popular social media in modern time. At first facebook just a platform for social connection but today its became a mass medium of information. At present all the news chennels, news portals have their online version through which people can get daily news from home and abroad by using facebook, even most of the young generation do not buy newspaper from market they newspaper online version and get all the news without perchasing newspaper. Different online market place provide their advertise and product information throw facebook. Yeap there a lot of unproductive activity and flow of information in facebook but over all advantage of it can minimize this little disadvantage.
Youtube another media which comes as blessing for modern people. A lots of people consider Youtube as modern tutor. There a lots of educational tutorials video is available in youtube. One can easily find his desired tutorial in youtube and learn about that by sitting in home. If a person desired to learn about photography he/she can easily learn it from youtube by wathing tutorials, Even when i started my GRE preparation i came to know a lots of thing about ETS and GRE from youtube. There a lots of content available in youtube and thus make us to unable to focus which one to focase on and somethimes we lose our attention, but this will minimize when we found our interesting and desired information and sort this large flow of information in accordance with our priority.
Mass media also play a major role for providing information and we get a lots of information and different type of information from different news source which sometimes make us confuse but we can manage ourself which one to see and which one to skip.
Mass media and internet give us a lots of available and easy means of information which has a positive effect on us but sometimes it shorten our attention span when we we make us confuse about which one to focus on. But people have he ability to sort the things which minimize the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...ent people who know more information is consider as the more powerful person. Now inform...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , internet
...in sources of information are mass media,internet,social media. Everyday people get thous...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ernet,social media. Everyday people get thousand of information. As people face a lots o...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...thousand of information. As people face a lots of information at the same time they ca...
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Suggestion: As
...n pay focus on their topics of interest.As there are a lots of information availab...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n pay focus on their topics of interest.As there are a lots of information availab...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...n their topics of interest.As there are a lots of information available people make up...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: A lot; Lots
...ch comes as blessing for modern people. A lots of people consider Youtube as modern tu...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...consider Youtube as modern tutor. There a lots of educational tutorials video is avail...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...youtube by wathing tutorials, Even when i started my GRE preparation i came to kn...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Even when i started my GRE preparation i came to know a lots of thing about ETS ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...arted my GRE preparation i came to know a lots of thing about ETS and GRE from youtube...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
...ted my GRE preparation i came to know a lots of thing about ETS and GRE from youtube. There a...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...g about ETS and GRE from youtube. There a lots of content available in youtube and thu...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...le for providing information and we get a lots of information and different type of in...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...kip. Mass media and internet give us a lots of available and easy means of informat...
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Message: Did you mean 'shortens'?
Suggestion: shortens
... positive effect on us but sometimes it shorten our attention span when we we make us c...
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Suggestion: we
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... But people have he ability to sort the things which minimize the disadvantages....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86830357143 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82070002885 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433035714286 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.8906081602 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.789473684 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196563011415 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682197346222 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549078420185 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126785987391 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579708779465 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.