In modern world democracy is the best and proven way to lead a country.Democracy means all the power lie in the hand of public.In democracy,the only power to pass a law is on the hand of parliament where MP are chosen by people of the country. Government officials serves as the servants of the nation. So government officials must carry out the will of people of the country rather than their own decision.
Most beautiful thing about democracy is that it only focus on the interest of people of the country.Democracy does not focus on the interest of military or other organization, it only focus on the interest of public. And this thing make it most successful mean to operate a country in modern world. Government acts as an organization which consist of people who are elected by people of the country and government officials are the servants of that organization who help them to operate the whole activity.The main objectives of the government is to lead the country to the development and ensure the security of the nation.Development of a country does not mean development of a group of people but the development of whole nation, so government official should focus on the public welfare. For this government official should focus on the will of the people.
If officials start to work base on their own will,the possibility of corruption will increased. And a corrupted government is the main obstacle for the development of the country.only a corrupted officials is sufficient to compromise a country security by leaking its sensitive information to the rival country.It is not good to leave all the power to the government officials.
Government officials are serve as the servant of the republic.So their duty is to carry out the will of the people of the republic rather than their own decisions.
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinio 63
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. 60
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97719869707 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13739124127 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410423452769 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.82863529 60.3974514979 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.8 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.21951772744 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335941422678 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171903038689 0.0831039109588 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137601865571 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24665470258 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784500771676 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.