Nature creates a lots of strange and interesting thing in different parts of the world.And in course of time These wilderness become the greatest wonder of the earth.Different country have different type of natural wilderness which bear the simble of civilization of that particular country.But this great natural wildnerness are assuaging or degrading with time.So every nation should pass laws to preserve this wilderness areas in their natural state.
Sunbderban, world largest mangroove forest are redusing its area as well as its different type of wildlife day by day. And this is happening because of greediness of some local people.The Royal bengal Tiger,world one of the most beautiful and ferocious animal are reducing by its number day by day. within 30-50 years its become almost half of its number and inevitably this number will continue to reduce and perhaps become near to zero if necessary steps should not taken by the Bangladesh government.And if such thing will happen next generations people will only know the name of Royal bengal Tiger and see them in photograph or video but not in real.but this reduction can be change if the government pass necessary laws to prevent local people as well as other hunters from hunt them.
Coxesbazar,worlds longest natural sea beach is also losing its appeal day by day because of lack of sincererity of tourists. Tourist left their snaks packets,drinks can and other garbage in the beach which deteriorate its beauty as well as pollute sea water.This kind of odd behaviour should be reduced by passing law by local government.
Nature gifts us a lot of blessing,but in course of time these natural wilderness are losing their appeal because of proper law and it implementation.And it is the responsibility of the nation to preserve these natural wonder by passing law.
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinio 63
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a lot; lots
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...g thing in different parts of the world.And in course of time These wilderness beco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14381270903 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96229705748 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.493445268 60.3974514979 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.714285714 118.986275619 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.7142857143 23.4991977007 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185778164842 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877441984383 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872841809946 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13842740648 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810249197639 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 14.1392134831 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 48.8420337079 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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