Young people are consider as the future of a country. Today's student could be tomorrow's prime minister or president.So if a country instill leadership from early stage of education it will help them to lead the country very strongly in future. But while instilling this we should be careful so that they do not find it as competitive rather than cooperative.Because if young people accept it as a competitive,they will find other young as a rival but not a cooperative.So the best way to prepare them for leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation rather than competiton.
If we look at the major political parties of Bangladesh we will easily understand how worse it is.The political parties consider the other parties only as competitor but not as cooperative. And the opositions do the same. It is the duty of the oppositions to talk against the policy of government which are harmful for the country.But in Bangladesh oppositions oppose every policy of the government even if it will be beneficial for country.As a result many important and good steps taken by government can not pass throw.This happen because opposition take government as rival,if they cooperate with government it will much more beneficial for the country.
In Private companies some senior officers take junior officers as a threat for their post,so they try to keep them unefficient and because of this mentality company face some serious loss.If the seniors cosidered the juniors as cooperative rather than competitors they will try to work together and thus lead the company towards a better position.
For a team,a captain is the leader in the playing field.It is his duty to encourage all the other players and set in their mind that they are playing as a team not as an individual and if they want to won the match they have to cooperate with each.Sometimes team consist with least skilled player win different titles only for their team spirit and sometimes team consisting with highly skilled paler loose the game because of their competition inside the team and lack of cooperation.
A leader will successful only when he take all ther people as a cooperative.But if he turn them as competitor he will be unsuccesful for sure. So it is not sufficient only to create leaders but also intilling cooperative mentality in them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97442455243 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98944053809 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501278772379 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.718564687 60.3974514979 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.5 118.986275619 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227794141908 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824857644663 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762380911185 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115307309455 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08336367385 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 14.1392134831 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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