Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Women have been successful in every field possible, from mundane professions like domestic help to extremely complex professions like astronauts which makes the claim stated in the argument nothing but a disseminated myth that men and women are different because of their physical differences.
Women in the world have come a long way from being dedicated to household and child birth related tasks to dominating predominently male dominent professions like politics, athletics and so on. They have been participating in diverse number of fields which were earlier thought to be just tasks that only men are capable to accomplish, this shows that women have been many such dominating fields and refuting the long held myth that most tasks are designed for men only. Hence, this refutes the claim stated in the argument that they are not physically suited as men for many tasks.
The claim can also be easily proven to be fallacious as women in today's world are participating in extremely laborious tasks like athletics and extremely demanding sports like football and cricket, which were only thought to be the sports that males can play. There are major women leagues in these games that entertain a myriad number of spectators. Many women also take part in olympic sports such as gymnasts, wrestling and boxing that are popularly considered to be very masculine. For example, M.C Mary Kom, a professional wrestler from a developing country like India where women are still treated as secondary citizens by most of the people in the society, has won gold in many competitions and also broke numerous stereotyes in the country that women are not suitable for many physically challenging tasks. She has not only refuted the many myths stating that women should be dedicated to less physically demanding taks but also inspired numerous women to pursue their interest in wrestling. There are many such women in the world, who can can provide a counterexample to the claim stated in the argument through their life experiences and professional choices.
If this claim is further investigated, it just seems to be misogynistic as women were naturally designed to endure pain. They are designed to reproduce life which is the most physically demanding task in the world. If women are physically inferior to men, it would probably be difficult for the human race to survive for millions of years.
Hence, the claim that men and women have inherent physical differences that makes women unsuitable for many tasks is baseless, as evidenced by millions of women who marked their name in the world through their remarkable contributions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: C
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73219294937 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455813953488 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5696961424 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.142857143 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403890801421 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15255275214 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105008134318 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260119029885 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914834213585 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.