“Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.”
Men and women are are equal or not? This is the biggest debate in the 21st century. Since ancient times we have been hearing about the disparate roles and tasks being assigned to men and women. According to me other than certain biological functions all the tasks are suitable to both men and women. Earlier it was believed that women should stay at home and take care of the household chores and family and men had to be the bread earners. But we have gradually overcome this stigma. Today, men and women are work together inside and outside the household.
There have been ample discussions regarding women been physically and emotionally weaker than men. Women have time and again proved their mettle and shown that there is no way women are behind men. They are equally representing themselves in the fields of military, sports, farming, politics, medicine, engineering. In India, women are allowed in military and they stand with men at the border to protect the country from any threats. There is no sport in the world that is meant only for men or women, no cadre in politics which is meant only for men, no medicine course which is meant only for men, no form of feminism where only women take a stand. The whole debate about physical differences between the sexes is futile because it's all in our head. In 21st century we have come a long way where women and men equally partcipate in sorts of activities and the gender gap inside and outside home have narrowed. Inspite of all this, there are certain societies where women are opressed and not given equal opportunities because of the belief that they are lower or weaker to men. We have to overcome such beliefs and instill confidence in women to be able to do every possible task and rise to power.
However, it is also true that certain physical differences exist but I would rather call them as biological differences like a woman can give birth to a child while a man cannot but science has defied this law. Recently, we heard a news where a man gave birth to a child. Thus, inherent physical differences does not imply any distribution of work, it's just we as human beings have made these gender roles and use them as a tool to dominate people. It is important to understand that biological differences are not physical differences. And we should should promote an egalitarian society instead of talking about gender roles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... tasks being assigned to men and women. According to me other than certain biological functions...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: should
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71904761905 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4400011152 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5553013426 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.380952381 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191780765772 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614458012986 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495902510863 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121746492686 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593005679691 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.